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yufuyouyuqinghuanshiyiweixunzhaozhenxianghezhengyidenianqingzhentan，zaishanshuiyushengchuangzuodexiaoshuo《rangnixiuzhengjuqing，meirangnibajuqinggaibenga》zhong，yufuyouyuqinghuanpojieleyigegefuzademituan。tongguoyongganhecongmingdetuili，yufuyouyuqinghuanzhujianjieshichuzhenxiang，bingweishouhaizheshenzhanglegongzheng。zheibuxiandaiyanqingxiaoshuochongmanxuanyiyujingxi，xinglaideyuqinglefaxianxiaonverpazaitaxiongkoushang，yizhixiaoshouzhengzaipaidatadelian，erbianhaibuduandechuanlainverdehuhuan【kuai……jiangyinfaduzheduizhihuihezhengyidesikao。

精彩章节

“wodexiaogongzhu，zheimejiumeijianxiangbabameiyoua？”yuqinglerenweidaojiushengxiandao，jinjiezhetatuimenjinlaibaoqixiaonverjugaogao：“youyouya，nimanyueyankuaidaole，youxiangyaodemeiyou，babajinimai。”yuqingleshuozhebianyikouqinzailenver**dexiaoliandanshang。

【baba，nizheihaochuhaimeijijiuxianzhanwobianyiheshima～shangbeiziwoyizhixiangyangzhixiongmao，danshiguojiabababuyunxu，buzhidaozheigexiaoshijienengyangxiongmaobu，yaoshinengyangdehuababajiwosongyizhijiuhaole，yaoshizaizheiyeyangbule，neijiujiwomaishucailiangshishuiguodezhongziba，youdedoujiwolaiyifen。】

“aaa，aa···”yufuyoushuangshoutuozheyuqingledelian，yibenzhengjingdeazhe，xiwangtabanengzaitadeashengzhongtihuidaotadeyisi【zhenxinleia，wodounengshuohuale，weilebuhedaobamahaidezhuangjigeyueyaba，zheirizishenmeshihoushigetoua。】yufuyouzhengzheshuiwangwangdedayanjingheyuqingleduishizhe，qituyubabalaigexinlingganying。

yuqingle：“······”

guinv，nibuzhidaonidebupingfanzaojiubaolulema，xianbushuogangchushengjiuhuipaba，zanjiushuonizheidouershiduotianle，jimeiniaoniaoyemeilababade，zheiqingkuanghelima？yaobushiwohenimajinisaowei，nizaozaibierenmianqianbaolule。buguonixiangyangxiongmaozheishierwodezhaowopengyoudatingdating，taneijiuyangleyizhi，woquwenwenshouxuzenmebanlide，daoshihoudengnimanyueyanjinidaiyizhihuilai。

shuoqiyingerlababazheicha，yufuyouyinweixinlinianlingbianxiaolehaizhenmeixiangzheimeduo，yinweitayouyidianjiepi，suoyipingshimeishijiuqiachuchenjue，keyishuoyuqingletamendewoshixianzaishijializuiganjingdedifangle，lianhuichendoumeiyou。yufuyouzheiqiajueqiaxiguanle，yishijianyemeiyouzhuyidaoloudong，buguojiusuantazhendezhuyidaole，zheigaiqiajuedehaishideqia，burantazheigedaizhejiyitoutaidewa，shizaishibunengjieshoubeizhiniaokushangdebabahuzai**shangdeshi。

“bazhidaonixiangyaoshale，guaiyouyoua，nibiezaigenbabaduishile，bayanjingkuaichoujinle。”yuqingleyishouzhezhunverdeyanjing，zijiganjinzhalejixiayan，tazaibuzhayanjiuyaochoujinle。

【haoba，kannizheimeshangdaodefenshangjintianjiuxianfangniyima，yaoshidengmanyueyanliwumeisongdui，hengheng～niguinvhaidehaohaohenijinxingxinlingganyingdeduishi。】

yuqingle：“······”

palenilexiaozuzong，kanlaiguangsongzhixiongmaohaibubaoxianna，buranbazhongzidalibaoyeyiqimailesongba，zheijiaoshuangzhongbaoxian。

zhuanyanjiudaoleyufuyoumanyuedeneitian。qingchenyizaoqilai，yunyuxinjiukaishijinverdabanle，guangshiyifujiulailai**huanlehaojijian，tashizhongtiaobuchumanyide。

【ma，zaidangexiaqujiudaozhongwule，wojiuchuanneigehongtongtongdedaihudiejiede，manyueyanma，dabandexiqingdiancaihaoshouhongbaoa。】

yunyuxinwuyudetingzhenversuisuinian，anzhenverdeyisichuanledaihudiejiedehongsexiaoqunzi，chuanshanghouzhenxinxianggehongbaofuwa，yaoshinvershoujiaobudong，liyuankanjiuxiangshangchanglimaidenizhensdwawa，suiranhonglexiedankanzhezhenxinkeai，shuiwangwangdedayanjingkandeyunyuxinneikewuchuanfangdecimuxina，jidongdezhijiebaozhenverhenhenqinleliangkou。

“mama，nihemeimeihaimeishoushihaoma？doukuaidaoyuehaodeshijiandianla。”yufushengcuicudeshengyincongmenwaichuanlai。

tahebabayuqinglezaojiuzhenglihaole，liangrenzaiketingyijingzuolehaoyihuile，yankanliyuedingdeshijianyuelaiyuejinle，yuqinglexiangzheyihuierlushanghaiyaohuafeixieshijian，bianzhishierzichushengcuicu。zhijianyufushengshenchusangenshouzhi，yuqinglefanlegebaiyandianlediantou，zheishifuziliangdeanhao。meicizheizhongcuilaopodehuozicongerzidongshihouyuqingledoushizhihuierzizuode，zhuyaoshitapazijikaikouqiziqiataruanrou，shengerziganmade，bujiushiyonglaibeiguodema。

yuqinglemaierziyidiandoubudaixinxude，dangranyongerziyeshiyaofuchudaijiade，yiqianyufushenghaixiaodeshihou，tabangbababanshi，babadoushixujitayijianwanju，xianzaitazhangdalebuhaohuyoule，yijianwanjuyijingbunengsuiyishihuantale，zuiqimayaosanjian。

“laile，laile，biecuile～”yunyuxinshuozhebianbaozhenverxialoule，yuqingleganmangqishenjieguonver，yijiasikouzuoshanglekaiwanglaozhaideche。

“meimei，dengdaolelaozhai，gegejieshaotanggetangdijinirenshia。”yufushengzuozaimamapangbiankanzheyufuyoushuodao。

gangbeichehuangdeyouxiehunhunyushuideyufuyou，zaitingdaogegeshuodelaozhaizheiliangzihou，turanyigejilingqingxingguolai【zheigejuqingchadianwangle，zenmetixingbamahuandaojingchaoluzoua，juqinglichangzoudeneitiaolujintianhuifashengchehuoa。suiranjuqingzhongwomenjiarendoumeiyoushengmingweixian，danhaishiyourenshoushangle，wokebuxiangmanyueyangenxiaoshuolideyiyangzaiyiyuanduguoa，wohaixiangzheshouhongbaoni。zenmezheng，bunengshuohuazhenxinfan。shizaibuxingzhinengyonglingqifanghuzhaole，suirandangedianshijian，danqimabuyongshoushangle。】

“xiaowang，jintianwokanchuxingruanjiantishijingfuluduche，gaihuanjingchaoluba。”yuqingletingdaonverdexinshenghou，limazhaojiekourangsijigaidao。

“haode，shaoye。”xiaowangsuiranzuishangdayingzhe，danshixinlihennamen，mingmingzaoshangtacaikanguochuxingruanjian，jintianjingfulubuduchea。danshishaoyeshuoshenmejiushishenmeba，zheikeshitadeyishifumua，zijideyijianbuzhongyao。

【babazhenjizhi，doubuyongwotixingjiugaidaole，pingshiyinggaiduoduoxiulianxinlingganying，kankanxianzaiduolingyan。】

yuqingle：“······”

guinv，buyongxiulianxinlingganyingla，bajiushizheimejizhicongming，zanzixuechengcai。pingshimeishijiuduokuabajiju，bajiuaitingzheige。

yinweigaidaodeyuanyin，zheidoudaoyuedingdedianlechehaimeiyouxingshidaolaozhai，laozhaineibianderendoudaoqile，jiushengxiazhurengongyijiameiyoudao。cishidianshishangzhengbaodaozhejingfululianhuanchehuo，yulaoyezikandaochuchehuodeneitiaoluhouxinshunjiantileqilai，ganjinjiaolaidaerzi，rangtalianxiyuqinglekankanshishaqingkuang。

“wangqueleguoquwangqueleni···”laidianyinlehuranzaicheneixiangqi，yuqinglenaqidianhuahou，yikanpingmushangxianshideshidagejiuganjinjietongle，zhishitahaimeiyoukaikou，jiutingdaodagejiqiedeshengyinchuanlaile：“nimenqingkuanghaihaoma？ganggangzaidianshishangwomenkandaojingfululianhuanchehuodebaodaole，zanbazheji，rangwodadianhuakankannimenneibiandeqingkuang。”

“dage，womenmeishi，jintianzhenghaoyoushirangxiaowanghuandaozoule，womenyaodaolaozhaihaidedengyihuier，nirangbamafangxin，womenyijiarendouanquan，jiushiyaowanyihuierdaole。”

“neixing，wogenbamashuoyisheng，nimenzhuyianquan，yihuierjiana。”shuowan，yuqingshengjiuguaduanledianhua。

yuqingleheyunyuxinduishiyiyanhoudouyouxieqingxing，kuiletamennengtingjiannverdexinsheng，buranjintianyeshilianhuanchehuolideyiyuanle。youlechehuoshijiandefasheng，zheiyegengjiaquedingletamennengtingdaonverxinshengdezhongyaoxing，zheishiyidingbunengrangnverzhidao，tamenyaoyanfangsishou。

【ai，jintianbuzhidaoyouyaosijigeren，haishideganjinbajuqingxianzouwan，dengzouwanjuqingxianfuzhuxiaoshijieshunlijinjile，zheigeshijiejiusuanshizhenshishijiele，yihouzaixiangyongjuqingyingxiangshijiejiubukenengle，wokebunengjixutoulanle，ershiduotianguoqucaizhijinjieleyiji，xianzaizhiyoulianqiqijiedexiuwei。weilegaibianyujiadepaohuimingyun，weilewoyihoubailandetuanchongshenghuo，woyufuyouyidingyaohaohaoxiulian！】yufuyouwojinquantoujizijidaqi。

yuqingle：“······”

guinv，neinijiabajing，babayihoudehaoshenghuojiukaonibaohule，buguowoguinvcongchushengkaishijiuzheimecaoxin，yihouhuibuhuizhangbugaoa？buxing，wodejiwoguinvmaibupin，rangtacongxiaobuqilai。xiangdaozhei，yuqinglebiandakaishoujikaishizailiulanqishangsouyingyouerkeshiyongdebupinyounaxie，yuqinglezhunbeiebuyixiazheikuaierdezhishi，ranhouzhaoyingyangshizhuanmenjixiaonverzuogeshipu。

yunyuxin：“······”

guinv，nijiushimadejiahouxiaomianao，zheibaonuanxiaoguoganggangde，madehoubanbeizijiukaonila，guinv，nihaohaojiayou！

yufusheng：“······”

meimei，nixiuliandeshinagebanben？wozuijinfanlehaojibenxiuzhenxiaoshuole，tianxuanzhizidoumeinixiuliandesudukuai，shuzhongbushishuoxiuweidaolianqizhongqihouzheixiuliansudujiuhuanmanlema，zadi？nizheiershiduotiancong6jiedao7jiehaixianqimanna，meiguanxi，gegebuxianqi，nibazheixiuweijiwobei，geyexiangxiuxian，zuijinwozuomengdoushiyujianfeixing。xiwangmeimeinengganyingdaowoxiuxiandechengxin，zaorichuanxiaxiuxiangongfajiwo。xiangdaozheier，yufushengyanbabadekanxiangyufuyou，xiwangtanengyumeimeilaigexinlingganying。

zaikanyufuyou，zaitaxiadingjuexinhaohaoxiulianhoujiubiyanzhuangshuile，shizeshenshiyijingjinrukongjianxiulianqule。zheigexiaoshijieliyaomoguiguaiyoudianduo，tazheibujinyaoxiulianfashuhaiyaoliantihexiulianshenshi，meibanfa，xiangzuodalaojiudebagefangmianloudongbushang，tadougoulezheimeduoshile，zuihouyishigoubuchengle，neijiuzhinengwuzhuangzijile。

bijingzheiyishitadexiaomingyoudiangui，duguoqulejiunengxiuchenggongdejinshendedaochengxian，dubuguoqujiudezhongtoukaishi，suoyia，weileyihoudounengxiaosa，juanzheiyishishiyinggaide。