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《wojichapinghou，shenmingdangwanlaiqiaomen》zuoweijinshenqideyibuduanpianyanqingwen，wenzhangjiegouhenhao，qianyoufubihouyouzhaoying，renwudexingge、xingweihuolinghuoxian，siluxinqi，zhuyaojiangdeshi：“dong……dong……dong……”bushiyongshouzhangpaimen，ershiyongzhiguanjie，yixia，youyixia，qiaodejiqihuanman，……

精彩章节

“womaidejingyinersai，maijiachengnuoconggenyuanjiejuewenti。daishangdangwan，loushangchaolewobanniandelinjuquanjiabaobi。

jingchashuosilesantian，kewoganghaitingjiantajiazaituoyizi。lijingguanshouzouersaishuobangwo**，

zhuanshenquefalaiyitiaoduanxin：‘daojuyihuishou，xiacirenwu：chapingnilaoban。’zheishi，

tianhuabanyouchuanlaidanzhusheng，zheicihaijiazazheyingerxiaosheng…dianjinlai，

kanwozenmeyongchapingshachuanzheigebeishenmingcaokongdeshijie！”1.“peng！peng！peng！

”loushangyoukaishitamadetiantianmalasongle！wo，linmo，yigechaojiuwanjiudekubichengxuyuan，

weiyidesheqiujiushixiabanhounengshuigezhengjue。keloushangneijiazi，jianzhijiushiyiqunchuanzhegaogenxiedexiniu，

tiantianyelishierdianzhunshikaiyan《loushangjinghun》。“gan！haiyouwanmeiwan！”woyibacheguozhentouwuzhutou，

danneichuantouloubandezhendongjiuxiangzuantouyiyangwangwotaiyangxuelizuan。shoujiwengwengzhendong，

shiwogangxiazaideyigejiao【erenzhicaizhe】deliumangruanjian。yemianxuehong，danchuangxiaozhang：【saoraobuduan？

shenghuobushun？yijianxiadan，zaixianjieyou！】simadanghuomayiba。worenzhenuhuo，

zaidingdanbeizhulihenhenqiaoxiayixingzi：**【mubiao：loushang301zhuhu。

suqiu：rangtamenlike、mashang、yongyuananjing！laozibuxiangzaitingdaorenheshengyin！】**dianji【querenxiadan】。

ruanjiandanchuang：【dingdanyishouli，zhixingyuan‘wumian’jijiangweininfuwu。zhuninshenghuoyukuai！】yukuaigepi。

wochixiaoyisheng，zheiwanyiergujijiushigeezuojuapp。raner，guaishifashengle。

jiuzaiwodianjiquerendexiayimiao，loushangzheneryulongdepaotiaosheng、tuoyizisheng……jiaranerzhi。bushizhujianjianxiao，

shixiangbeirenanlejingyinjianyiyang，shunjian，siji。zhenggeshijieqingjingle。wolengzhule，

erduolizhiyouzijiyinweifennuershangweipingxidewengwengsheng。“**？zheiapp……laizhende？

”zheizhongjizhideanjing，fanerrangwoxinliyoudianfamao。danlianxujialesantianbandepibeishunjianyongleshanglai，

woyegubudeduoxiang，touyiwai，zhijieshuisiguoqu。zheiyijue，shuideqiansuoweiyoudechen，liangemengdoumeiyou。

zhidaodiertianzhongwu，wocaibeimenwaicaozaderenshenghejingdishengchaoxing。mimihuhudakaimen，

waimianloudaolizhanmanlejingcha，linjumenweizaiyiqiqieqiesiyu。“tingshuosiguangle……”“taiherenle，

yijiasikou，qiaowushengxide……”woxinligedengyixia，lazhuyigexiangshudelinju：“zhangyi，

loushang……zenmele？”zhangyilianseshabai，yadishengyin：“301，quanjia……doumeile！jingchashuoshicusi，

silezhishaosantianle！kezuotianbanyewohaitingdaotajiayoudongjingni……”santian？

wozuotianlingchenhaibeitamenchaodexiangsharen！yigechuanzhezhifu、mianrongyansudejingguanzouguolai，

shifuzezheipianqudewangdui。takanlekanwo：“nishilouxia201dezhuhu？

zuijinyoumeiyoutingdaoloushangyoushenmeyichangdongjing？”wohoulongfagan，naoziliquanshineigexuehongsedeapp。

woqiangzuozhending：“mei……meiyou，woshuidesi。”wangduiruilidemuguangzaiwolianshangtingdunlejimiao，meizaizhuiwen，

zhuanshenquzhihuixianchang。woguanshangmen，beikaozhemenban，xinzangkuangtiao。shouxinliquanshilenghan。shiqiaohema？

wozhandouzhetaochushouji，diankaineige【erenzhicaizhe】app。dingdanzhuangtaixianshi：【yiwancheng】。

xiamianhaiyouyixingxiaozi：【zhixingyuan‘wumian’yiwanmeijiejuenindekunrao，

qingjiyuwuxinghaopinge~】woshouzhifadou，xianglikebazheixiemenderuanjianshanle。jiuzaizheishi，

appyoudanchuyigexinchuangkou，zheicishichunheisedebeijing，

daizhexuesedeniuquwenzi：【jiancedaoyouzhikehu‘linmo’，qianlipinggu：sji。】【gongxinin，

huode‘shenmingyouxi’neicezige。】【xinshourenwuyifabu：qingzaijinwan12dianqian，

chapingninzuotianshoudaodewaimai。renwujiangli：100jifen。shibaichengfa：suijiboduoyizhongganguan。】【youxi，

zhengshikaishi。zhunin……wandeyukuai。】wotongkongzhousuo。shoujipingmudeguang，yingzaiwohaowuxuesedelianshang。

chaping……waimai？wozuotianjiabantaiwan，queshidianleyifenhennanchidewaimai，dangshiqidexiangjichaping，

houlaitaileiwangle。zheitamadaodishishenmeguidongxi？！wokanzheneixing“shibaichengfa：suijiboduoyizhongganguan”，

yiguhanyicongjiaodibanzhichongtianlinggai。zheiyijingbushiezuojule。loushang301desi，

jueduihezheigeappyouguan！woxianzaigaizenmeban？fucong？haishi……wodemuguang，

luozaileshoujipingmuneigeciyande【chaping】anniushang。

2.shoujipingmushangneixing“shibaichengfa：suijiboduoyizhongganguan”xiangshaohongdeluotie，tangdewoyanjingshengteng。

boduoganguan？bianchengxiazi？longzi？huozhe……shiquchujue，bianchengyijuxingshizourou？gan！

zheitamashishenmeguiyouxi！wodiyifanyingshixiangbazheiposhoujizale。

keloushang301yijiasikousijidelianzaiwoyanqianhuangyou。zheibushiqiaohe，zheiappzhendenengsharen，huozheshuo，

nengyinlaimouzhong……dongxi。fankangdeniantougangmaochulai，jiuxiangbeiyipenbingshuijiaomie。

wolianduishoushishenmedoubuzhidao。“lengjing，linmo，nishixiedaimade，luojishinideqiangxiang。

”woshenxiyikouqi，qiangpozijifenxixianzhuang。

xi”……neicezige……renwu……jifen……chengfa……zheixiangjilemougeeliezhijidewuxianliuxiaoshuosheding。

erwoxianzai，jiushineigebuxingbeixuanzhongde“wanjia”。chapingwaimai。zheigerenwukanqilaijiandan，

shenzhiyoudianhuaji。danjingliguo**，woshenzhirenheyuzheigeappguanliandexingwei，

doubansuizhezhimingdeweixian。wodiankaiwaimaipingtai，

zhaodaozuotianneigedingdan：【“wangji”shaokao（jiefangludian）】，dianlefenkaoqiezinanchidexiangjiaomobu，

yangrouchuanbanshengbushuhaiguideyaosi。dangshiwodepingjiayushiwuxingdefennu，xianzaiquezhishengxiashenrugusuidehanleng。

shouzhixuanzai【pingjia】anniushang，chichianbuxiaqu。zheigechapingyidanjichu，huiyinlaishenme？

yigetizhexuelinlincaidaodeshaokaodianlaoban？haishi……shijianyifenyimiaoguoqu，chuangwaidetiansejianjiananchen。

qingditiaodongzhe：【03:59:58】……【03:59:57】……yapoganxiangyizhiwuxingdeshou，

ezhuwodehoulong。“made，hengshudoushisi！”womaleyiju，xinyiheng，shouzhifeikuaidizaipingmushangqiaoji，

zhijiexuanlezuidideyixing，pinglunneirongyanjianyigai：【goudoubuchi！langfeiliangshi！jianyidaobi！】dianji，

fasong。jihushizaipingjiafasongchenggongdeshunjian，shoujizhendongleyixia。

【erenzhicaizhe】appdanchutishi：【xinshourenwuwancheng！jianglijifen：100。dangqianjifen：100。

】【shangchengxitongyijiesuo，jingqingtansuo。】jiuzhei？shenmedoumeifasheng？wojinbengdeshenjingshaoweifangsongleyidian，

nandaoshiwotaiminganle？yexuzheizhishiyigeeliedewanxiao，301desizhendeshiqiaohe？raner，

zheizhongjiaoxingxinlizaiwuyeshierdianzheng，beiyizhenguilvdeqiaomenshengchedifensui。

“dong……dong……dong……”bushiyongshouzhangpaimen，ershiyongzhiguanjie，yixia，youyixia，qiaodejiqihuanman，

daizheyizhonglingrenyasuandezhanchougan。wohunshenhanmaodaoshu，xinzangshunjiantiaodaosangziyan。zheigeshijiandian，sheihuilai？

wonieshouniejiaodizoudaomenhou，pingzhuhuxi，coudaomaoyanshangwangwaikan。loudaolideshengkongdengmeiliang，yipianhunan。

danjiezhechuangwaitoujinlaideweiguang，wokandaoyigemohuderenyingzhanzaimenwai。tachuanzhemoutuanwaimaideminghuangsezhifu，

daizhetoukui，shouli……sihuzhendetizheyigesuliaodai。“nindewaimai……”menwaichuanlaiyigeshengyin，siya，

ganse，xiangshishengdaibeishazhimoguo，“qing……kai……men……na……yi……xia……”wotoupishunjianzhakai！

wogenbenmeidianwaimai！erqie，zheishengyin……wanquanbuxiangshihuorennengfachude！wosisiwuzhuzui，

buganfachurenheshengyin。lenghanshunjianjintoulehoubei。“nindewaimai……”neigeshengyinyouxiangleqilai，

daizheyizhongbuyiburaodezhiao，“qing……ji……wu……xing……hao……ping……”tayibianshuozhe，

yibiankaishiyongtou……yixia，yixiadizhuangjizhewodefangmen！“dong……dong……dong……”bushiqiaomen，

shizhuangmen！lidaobuda，danneizhongchenmendezhuangjisheng，hunhezhetahoulonglifachudehehesheng，

zaisijideshenyelixiandegewaikongbu。wohedelianlianhoutui，chadiantanruanzaidi。jiuzaizheishi，

loudaolideshengkongdengdagaishibeizhuangmenshengzhenliangle。hunhuangdedengguangshunjianzhaolianglemenwai。

woyezhongyukanqinglemaoyanwaide“dongxi”。neiqueshishiyigechuanzhewaimaizhifuderen，

dantadelian……tadeliandabufenyijingfulan，yanzhuziyizhidalazaiyankuangwai，lingyizhikongdongdongde，

pamanlequchong！toukuixiadepifuchengxianchusirendeqinghuise。tashoulitizhedeyebushiwaimaidai，

ershiyigeshenzheanhongseyetide、bantoumingdeheiselajidai！

“he……na……wai……mai……ji……hao……ping……”fulandewaimaiyuanjixuyongtouzhuangjizhemenban，

zhanchoudeyetijianzaimaoyanshang，mohulewodeshixian。“a——！”woneixindekongjudadaoledingdian，

renbuzhufachuyishengduancudejingjiao。menwaidezhuangjishengjiaranerzhi。neikefulandetoulu，mengditaileqilai，

neizhidalazhedeyanzhu，jingzhundi、sisidi……duishanglemaoyan！takanjianwole！tazhidaowozailimian！

“zhao……dao……ni……le……”taliekaizui，luchusenbaide、daizhexuesideyachi，

xingchengyigejiqiguiyidexiaorong。ranhou，tahoutuiyibu，kaishigengjiayonglidi、fengkuangdizhuangjifangmen！“peng！

peng！peng！”laojiudefangmenfachubukanzhongfude**，mensuojuliehuangdong，fangfoxiayimiaojiuyaobeizhuangkai！

wohunfeiposan，liangundaipadichongjinchufang，mochuleyibachenzhongdekangudao。bingliangdedaobingwozaishouli，

shaoweijilewoyisiweibuzudaodeanquangan。wobeikaozheqiangbi，dakouchuanzhecuqi，

yanjingsisidingzheneishanfangfosuishihuibeigongpodemen。zhuangjishengchixuledagaiwufenzhong。turan，

yiqieshengyindoutingzhile。menwai，siyiyangdejijing。ta……zoulema？woxinzangkuangtiao，buganfangsongjingti。

youdengleshifenzhong，menwaiyijiumeiyourenhedongjing。woguqizheibeizizuidadeyongqi，zaicizhandouzhe，

coujinlemaoyan……waimian，kongkongruye。neigefulandewaimaiyuanxiaoshile。

zhiyoumenshanghedimiancanliudeyixieanhongse、sanfazheechoudezhanye，zhengmingtagangcaiqueshilaiguo。woshuangtuiyiruan，

shunzheqiangbihuazuozaidishang，kangudao“kuangdang”yishengdiaozaishenbian。quanshendeliqidoubeichoukongle，

zhishengxiajiehouyushengdejuliechuanxihebinglengdehoupa。jiuzaizheishi，koudailideshouji，youzhendongleyixia。

woxiangshoujingdetuziyiyangdanqilai，duoduosuosuoditaochushouji。

erenzhicaizhe】appzaicidanchutishi：【jinggao：ninyiyinqi‘dijiyuannianti·waimaiyuandezhinian’zhuyi。

】【tishi：jifenkezaishangchengneiduihuanwupinhuonengli，yiyingduiweiji。

】【richangrenwuyigengxin：qingyumingwanshierdianqian，chapingninsuozaixiaoqudewuye。renwujiangli：50jifen。

shibaichengfa：boduoweijue。】wokanzhepingmushangbinglengdewenzi，youkanlekandishangneibakangudao，

zuihoumuguangluozaimaoyanwaikongdangdangde、quecanliuzhewuzideloudao。

yiguhunzazhekongju、fennuheyisiniuquxingfendeqingxu，zaiwoxiongqianglifanyong。wozhidao，wodepingfanrensheng，

congxiazaineigeappdeneiyikeqi，jiuchedijieshule。zheibushijieshu。zheitamajinjinshigekaishi。

3.zaidishangtanzuolebangeduoxiaoshi，wocaimianqiangzhaohuiyidianliqi。shoujiaohaishibingliangde，

gangcaimenwaineizhangfulandelianhefengkuangdezhuangmensheng，xiangemengyiyangluoyinzainaozili，huizhibuqu。

“dijiyuannianti·waimaiyuandezhinian……”wodingzheappshangdetishi，nannanziyu。suoyi，

wochapingyinlaide，bushihuoren，ershimouzhongyoufumianqingxuhezhiniangouchengde……guaiwu？neiloushang301yijia，

shibushiyeshibeileiside“yuannianti”gandiaode？neigezhixingyuan“wumian”，youshishenmedongxi？

yuexiangyuejuedetoupifama，zheigeshijieyuanbiwoxiangxiangdegengjiaguiyiheweixian。wobunengzuoyidaibi！

wodemuguangluozai【shangchengxitongyijiesuo】detishishang。xiangzhuazhuzuihouyigenjiumingdaocao，woganjindianlejinqu。

shangchengdejiemianfeichangjianlou，xiangshiershinianqiandewangye。liebiaolizhiyouliaoliaojiyangdongxi。

【qingxinfu（yicixing）：qusandijijingshenganrao。shoujia：30jifen。

】【tiliyaoji（xiao）：kuaisuhuifubufentili。shoujia：20jifen。

】【shijueqianghua（chujibeidongjineng）：xiaofutishengdongtaishijuebuzhuonenglijiyejianshili。

shoujia：100jifen。】【xiansuotishi（yicixing）：zhenduidangqianrenwutigongyitiaomohuxiansuo。

shoujia：50jifen。】……dongxibuduo，danjiagesigui。wowanchengyigexinshourenwuyecai100jifen。

shijueqianghua？zheigejinengmiaoshurangwoxintouyidong。zuoweichengxuyuan，wodeshilibenlaijiubusuantaihao，

ruguonengtishengdongtaishijueheyeshinengli，wulunshiyingduitufaweixian，haishitanchaqingkuang，douyoujudabangzhu。

100jifen，ganghaoshiwodequanbujiadang。huanbuhuan？xiangqigangcaizaimaoyanlikandaodeneizhangkongbulanlian，

yijikenengsuishihuichuxiandexiayige“yuannianti”，woyiyaoya。“huanle！huoxiaqucaiyoushuchu！

”dianji【goumai】，querenzhifu。100jifenshunjianqingling。jihuzaitongshi，

woganjueshuangyanyizhenqingweidecitonghezhuore，xiangshidijinleqiangxiaodeyanyaoshui。worenbuzhubishangyanjing，

jimiaozhonghou，bushiganxiaoshi。wohuanhuanzhengkaiyan。shijie……biandebuyiyangle。bushikandegengyuan，

ershi……geng“qingxi”le。fangjianliyuanbenhunandejiaoluo，xianzainengkanqinggengduoxijie。

woxiayishidikanxiangchuangwaifeiguodeyeniao，neigaosushandongdechibangguiji，zaiwoyanzhongjingranbiandeyouxie……huanman，

keyibeibuzhuo！wozoudaoweishengjian，duizhejingzi。wodetongkongshenchu，

sihulveguoyisijidande、jihuwufachajuedejinseliuguang。zheijiushi……shijueqianghua？zhi！taizhile！

zheizhongliganjianyingdeqianghua，rangwozaiwujindekongjuzhong，zhongyuzhuazhuleyisishishizaizaidelilianggan！xingfenzhiyu，

woxiangqileloushang301。zhiqianjingchashuotamenshicusi，silesantian。

danwozuotianlingchenhaitingdaoguoshengyin……yigefengkuangdeniantoumaolechulai。woshenxiyikouqi，qingqingdakaifangmen。

loudaolihaicanliuzheneigufuchouwei。wopingzhuhuxi，dianqijiaojian，xiaoxinyiyidixiangloushangzouqu。

301demenkouhailazhejingjiexian，menshangyetiezhefengtiao。danzheinanbudaowo，laoshixiaoqudefanghuomen，

menkuangshangfangyoutongfengchuang。wozuoyoukankan，querenwuren。zhupao，dengqiang，yongshoubazhumenkuangshangyan，

linghuodifanleshangqu。qianghuahoudeshijueheshentixiediaoxing，rangzheigeyuanbenyoudiannandudedongzuobiandeqingsongbushao。

pazaitongfengchuangshang，wochaolimianwangqu。shijueqianghuahoudeyeshinenglifahuilezuoyong。jishiwuneiyipianqihei，

woyirannengdazhikanqingketingdelunkuo。yipianlangjie。zhuoyifandao，beizisuipiansanluoyidi。

qiangbishang……sihuyouyixieshensede、penjianzhuangdewuzi。wodemuguangmengdidinggezaiketingzhongyangdeditanshang。

jiezhechuangwaitoujinlaideweiruoyueguang，woqingxidikandao，ditanshangyouzhejigemohude、lingluande……jiaoyin？bu，

bushijiaoyin！neixingzhuang……gengxiangshimouzhongdongwuyongsizhipaxingliuxiadezhuahen！erqiefeichangda！

gengrangwojibeifaliangdeshi，zaineixiezhuahenfujin，

ditanshangchengxianchuyipianbuguizede、shenhesedeganheyinji——neishidaliangxueyejintouhouliuxiadehenji！

jingchashuoshicusi？zheixianchangfenmingshijingliguojidujiliedezhengzhahebodou！turan，

wodemuguangbeiketingjiaoluodeyiyangdongxixiyin。neishiyige……wanju？

yigesuliaode、secaixianyandeertongyaoling。jiuzaiwokandaoyaolingdeshunjian，shijueqianghuabeidongchufa！

wodetongkongmengdishousuo，shiyefangfozidaibianjiaojingtou，shunjianlajin、jujiaozaineigeyaolingshang。

wo“kan”daoyaolingdebiaomian，fugaizheyicengjiqidanbo、jihuwufachajuede……heisewuqi！

neiwuqirutonghuowuban，zaihuanhuanrudong，sanfazheyizhonglingrenjidubushideyinlengqixi。yucitongshi，

yiduanposui、hunluan、chongmanjizhikongjudehuamian，rutongdianliubanqiangxingyongruwodenaohai！

——yigechuanzheshuiyidexiaonvhai，quansuozaiketingjiaoluo，shoulijinjinzhuazheneigeyaoling，hedehunshenfadou。

——yigejuda、niuqude、rutongheiselannigouchengdeyinying，zhengcongtianhuabanshangdiluo，tameiyougudingdexingzhuang，

zhiyouwushuzhicanbaide、meiyoutongkongdeyanjingzaiyinyingbiaomianzhengkai。——yinyingshenchuniuqudechushou，

chanzhulenvhaidefumu，tamenliancanjiaodoufabuchu，shentijiuxiangbeixigandejuziyiyangxunsuweisuo。

——nvhaihedepinmingyaohuangshouzhongdeyaoling，fachuqingcuide“dingling”sheng。——neiyinyingsihubeishengyinxiyin，

suoyoudebaiyanqiushunjianzhuanxiangnvhai……“e！”womenhengyisheng，congneizhongguiyideshijuehuanxiangzhongtuolichulai，

chadiancongmenkuangshangshuaixiaqu。xinzangkuangtiao，lenghanjintouleyifu。neishishenmeguidongxi？！

bigangcaineigefulandewaimaiyuankongbuyibaibei！301yijia，genbenbushisiyushenme“cusi”，

ershibeineigekongbudeyinyingguaiwunveshade！neigezhixingyuan“wumian”，

nandaojiushizhaohuanhuozhekongzhizheizhongguaiwudecunzai？erneigechapingapp，jiushixianjifumianqingxu，

zhaohuansiwangdemeijie！woshoujiaobingliangdipaxialai，taoyesidechonghuizijijia，sisisuoshangmen。beikaozhefangmen，

wodakouchuanxi，shijueqianghuadailaideneidianliliangganbeigengdadekongjusuoqudai。zheigeyouxi，

yuanbiwoxiangxiangdegengjiaheianhezhiming。shoujizaicizhendong，pingmuliangqi，neigexuehongsedeapptubiao，

xiangyizhichaonongdeyanjing，zhushizhewo。xiayigerenwu，chapingwuye……dengdaiwode，youhuishishenme？

4.chapingwuye？wokanzhexinrenwu，xinlipansuan。womenxiaoqudewuyequeshitingcaodan，shoufeigao，

banshixiaolvdi，diantihuailebangeyuedoumeixiuhao，chapingtamenwohaowuxinlifudan。danyouleqianliangcidejingyan，

wozhidaozheichapingjuebujinjinshidongdongshouzhineimejiandan。kendinghuiyinlaimafan，kenengshiwuyebaoanhuashendeguaiwu，

huozheshibeichapingyinlaide、panjuzaiwuyebangongshidemouzhongdongxi。“dezuodianzhunbei。”wodiankaijifenshangcheng，

xianzaijifenshi0，qiongdedingdangxiang。kanlaizhinengxianwanchengrenwu，nadao50jifen，cainenghuandianbaomingdedongxi。

diertianwanshangshiyidianduo，wochuaizheneibakangudao，chuanzheshenseyifu，xianggeyoulingyiyangliuchulejiamen。

womeishadaozhijiequwuyebangongshichaping，neilixianzaikendingmeiren，erqieyinsensende。

wodasuanzaixiaoqulizhaogedifang，bachapingfalejiuxing。renwuyaoqiushi“chapingwuye”，youmeizhidingdidian。

woduozaixiaoquhuayuandeguanmuconghoumian，taochushouji，zhaodaowuyegongsideyemian，shouzhifeiwu，

bajiyadebumanquandouqingxiechuqu：【shiweisucan！shoufeibubanshi！diantihuailebangeyue，

laorenpaloutishuailesheifuze？lajiduijirushan，nimenshiqingwomenlaizhulajichangma？ganjindaobi！】yixing，

chaping，fasong！dianjifasongdeshunjian，wolikepingzhuhuxi，quanshenjiroujinbeng，shijueqianghuadaojizhi，

jingtidisaoshizhesizhou。yimiao，

liangmiao……yifenzhongguoqule……zhouweizhiyouxiayedechongmingheyuanchumaluyinyuechuanlaidechesheng。shenmedoumeifasheng？

nandao……shiwoxiangduole？richangrenwudeweixianchengdubixinshourenwudi？

jiuzaiwoshaoweifangsongjingtidechanei——“shua！”yidaoheiyingmengdicongwocehoufangdeshuconglicuanlechulai！

sudukuaidejingren！shijueqianghuarangwomianqiangbuzhuodaotadedongzuo！neisihu……shiyigechuanzhebaoanzhifuderen？

dantadedongzuojiqijiangying，guanjiefachu“kabakaba”deshengxiang，lianshangmeiyourenhebiaoqing，yanjingshiquanheide，

meiyouyanbai，shoulilinzheyigenchenzhongdexiangjiaogun，daizheyiguefeng，zhijiechaowodenaodaizalexialai！“**！

”wohanmaodaoshu，genbenlaibujisikao，shentipingjiebennengxiangpangbianyigun！“hu！

”xiangjiaoguncazhewodeerbianzazaidishang，fachuchenmendexiangsheng，nitufeijian。zheiyaoshizashile，

wonaodaikendingkaipiaole！nei“baoan”yijibuzhong，fachuyizhongleisiyeshoudedihou，

zaicihuiwuzhexiangjiaogunchongshanglai。tadedongzuosuiranjiangying，danliliangqida，suduyebuman！

woshoulizhiyouyibakangudao，zhangduchikui，genbenbuganyingjie。zhinengpingjieqianghuahoudedongtaishijue，buduanshanduo，

xianxianghuansheng。zheiyangxiaqubuxing，wotilichizaohaoguang！“miaozhuntadeguanjie！

”yigeqingcuiyoudaizhejiqiedenvshengturancongpangbianxiangqi。woxinzhongyijing，zheilihaiyoubieren？！

dancikerongbudewoduoxiang，neigenvshengsihuyouzhongrangrenxinfudeliliang。woyanshenyili，

kanzhun“baoan”zaicijuqixiangjiaogundekongdang，yigeaishentujin，kangudaohenhenpixiangtadexigaiguanjie！

“kaca！”yishenglingrenyasuandecuixiang！nei“baoan”dexigaiyingshengersui，danbushiliuchuxianxue，

ershibaochuyituanheisede、rutongmianxubandewuqi！tashentiyiwai，dongzuoshunjianchihuanxialai。youxiao！

wojingshendazhen，chentabingyaotaming！fanshouyoushiyidao，henhenpizaitalingyitiaotuidexigaishang！“kaca！

”“baoan”putongyishengguidaozaidi，shentijuliedichouchuzhe，gengduodeheisewuqicongguanjiechuyisanchulai。

tashituyongxiangjiaogunzhichengshenti，danneiwuqifangfodaizouletasuoyoudeliliang，jimiaozhonghou，tacheditandaozaidi，

budongle。ranhou，tadeshentikaishixiangshadiaoyiyangfenghua，xunsuxiaosanzaikongqizhong，

zuihouzhishengxiayitaokongdangdangdebaoanzhifuheneigenxiangjiaogun。wozhuzhekangudao，dakoudakoudichuanzhecuqi，

xinzangkuaiyaotiaochuxiongqiang。“fanyingbucuoma，xinren。”neigenvshengzaicixiangqi。womengdizhuantou，wojinkangudao，

jingtidikanxiangshengyinlaiyuan。zhijianpangbianneikedashudeyinyingli，zouchuyigenvhai。takanqilaiershichutou，

biwoaibangetou，chuanzhejiandandetxuniuziku，zhazhemawei，liandanqingxiu，

danyanshenliqueyouzheyunianlingbufudelengjinghe……yisipibei。tashoulimeinawuqi，zhishisuiyidizhanzaineili。

“nishishei？”woshengyinshaya，chongmanjiebei。shijueqianghuarangwozhuyidao，

tazhoushensihuyingraozheyicengjidande、jihukanbujiandeweiguang。“suxiao，heniyiyang，daomeidewanjia。

”tatanletanshou，shiyizijimeiyoueyi，“ganghaozaifujinzuorenwu，tingdaodongjingjiuguolaile。”wanjia？

tayeshi“shenmingyouxi”dewanjia？“nizenmezhengming？”womeiyoufangsongjingti。zaizheigejianguideyouxili，

renherendoukenengshidiren。suxiaoxiaolexiao，taiqishouzhilezhizijidetaiyangxue：“nigangcaizhandoudeshihou，

心里活动很丰富嘛。

‘zheiwanyierliqizhenda’、‘wanleyaochengbuzhule’、‘nage**zaishuohua’……ng，

zuihouneijuwobushihenaiting。”wotongkongzhousuo！ta……tanengzhidaowozaixiangshenme？！duxinshu？！

“biejinzhang，zhishiduanzande、qiancengdeduqu。”suxiaojieshidao，“wodenenglishi‘xinlingganying（chuji）’，

chixushijianduan，xiaohaoda。yaoshinengsuibianyong，wogangcaijiuzhijiegaosunitaderuodianle，erbushihanchulai。

”wokanzheta，xinzhongdezhenjingwuyifujia。chuleshijueqianghua，jingranhaiyouduxinzheizhongnengli？

zheigeyouxidaodifuyuleduoshaoxiqiguguaidedongxi？“ni……shenmeshihoubeijuanjinlaide？

”woshaoweifangsongleyidian，dankangudaohaiwozaishouli。“binizaojitian。”suxiaotanlekouqi，

lianshangluchuyisikuse，“yeshiyinweishoubulelinjuzaoyin，xialegeleisideruan……e，

yongnimenchengxuyuandehuashuo，kenengshige‘liumangruanjianjuhebao’lidemougedongxi，ranhoujiuzhongzhaole。

”talianwoshichengxuyuandouzhidao？kanlaiduxinshizhende。“gangcaineidongxi……”“neishi‘**kongdekuilei’，

”suxiaojiekoudao，“busuanzhenzhengdeyuannianti，

gengxiangshibeiyouxililiangzanshiqinshikongzhidehuorenhuozhegangsibujiudeshiti。ruodiantongchangzainengliangjiedian，

biruguanjie、meixin。”huoren？wobeiexindaole。zheiyouxijianzhihaowudixian！【richangrenwuwancheng！

jianglijifen：50。dangqianjifen：50。】shoujishishidizhendong，tishirenwuwancheng。wokanzhesuxiao，

xinqingfuza。turanyudaoyigetonglei，rangwozaijuewangzhongkandaoleyisiweiguang，

dantadeduxinnengliyourangwogandaojidubushihejiebei。“zuduima？xinren。”suxiaokanzhewo，henzhijie，

“yigerentainanhuole。huxiangyougezhaoying。wozhidaonikendingbuxinwo，danzhishao，

zainongqingchuzheigeyouxizhenxiang、zhaodaobaituofangfazhiqian，hezuobidandadudoushengcunjilvgao。”tashuodehenxianshi。

wokanzhedishangneitaozhengzaihuanhuanxiaoshidebaoanzhifu，youkanlekansuxiaoneishuanglengjingdeyanjing。

zaizheigeguiyierweixiandeshijieli，duziyiren，queshicunbunanxing。“……linmo。

”wobaoshanglezijidemingzi，suanshimorenlezuduiyaoqing，“wodenenglishishijueqianghua。”“hezuoyukuai，

linmo。”suxiaoxiaolexiao，ranhoulianseyizheng，“buguo，womendeganjinlikaizheili。

gangcaidedongjingkenengyinlaibiededongxi，huozhe……‘qingdaofu’。”“qingdaofu？

”wobuzhuodaozheigemoshengdeci。

suxiaodebiaoqingbiandeningzhongqilai：“yiqunyilieshaqitawanjia、lveduojifenhenengliweiledefengzi。tamen，

bizheixieguaiwukepadeduo。”5.wohesuxiaoxunsulikailexiaoquhuayuan，

duojinlefujinyijiaershisixiaoshiyingyedekuaicandian。zheigeshijiandian，

dianlizhiyoujigeaoyedenianqingrenheyigepazaizhuozishangshuijuedeliulanghan。zuozaizuijiaoluodeweizhi，

rekafeidexiangqishaoweiqusanleyixieneixindehanyi。“shuoshuoba，nizhidaoduoshao？”woyadishengyinwendao。

suxiaojiaobanzhebeilidekafei，yanshenyouxiefangkong：“wozhidaodeyebuduo，

dabufenshikaozijimosuohe……duquyixiedijiguaiwusuipianxinxidedaode。”tadunledun，

kaishijiangshu：“zheige‘shenmingyouxi’，genjuneixiesuipianxinxixianshi，

kenengshiyigehuozheyiqunwomenwufalijiede……gaoweicunzaichuangzaode。”“gaoweicunzai？shenming？

”“keyizheimelijie。dantamenkenenggengxiangshiyizhong……zunxunmouzhongguizedeyuzhouxianxiang，

huozheshiyimouzhongteshunengliangweishidelveshizhe。ertamendezhuyaoshiliang，jiushizhihuishengwude……fumianqingxu。

”“fumianqingxu？”woxiangqilechaping，“biruyuanhen、fennu、buman？”“dui！

chapingshiqizhongyizhongfeichangzhijie、gaoxiaodeshoujifangshi。”suxiaodiantou，“dangwomenfabuchaping，

huozheanzhaorenwuyaoqiuquzhizaofumianshijianshi，chanshengdeqiangliefumianqingxu，huibeizheigeyouxixitongshouji，

xiangdangyu……xiangneixie‘shenming’xianshanglejipin。”wobeihoufaliang：“suoyi，

womenjishitigongjipinde‘siliao’，yeshigongtamenqulede‘jiaodoushi’？”“chabuduo。jifenxitong，

kenengjiushitamentoufangde‘youer’，jiliwomengengjijidiquzhizaofumianqingxu，huxiangsisha，

tigonggengjingcaide‘jiemu’。”suxiaodeshengyindaizhechaofeng。“nei301jiadeneigeyinyingguaiwu，

haiyougangcaidebaoankuilei……”“doushiyouxixitonggenjuwomenzhizaodefumianqingxu，

‘shengcheng’huozhe‘xiyin’guolaidediweitouyinghuozheshuo‘yuannianjuheti’。”suxiaojieshidao，

“chapingyueqianglie，zhenduideduixiangyuanqiyuezhong（biruwuyebenshenkenengjiujiyalehenduozhuhudeyuannian），

yinlaidedongxijiuyuemafan。neige‘wumian’，kenengshigenggaojibiede‘zhixingyuan’，shenzhishixitongdeyibufen。

”woxiaohuazhezheixiexinxi，ganjuesanguandoubeidabaile。

womenshenghuozaiyigebeigenggaoweiducunzaiguancehetouweideyugangli？“nei‘qingdaofu’ni？”tidaozheige，

suxiaodeliansegengjianankan：“wanjiazhongdebaileihe……qiangzhe。tamenfaxian，lieshaqitawanjia，

keyizhijielveduoduifangxinkuzanxiadejifen，shenzhiyouxiaogailvboliduifangdenenglijuweijiyou。

zheibixinxinkukuzuorenwukuaiduole，ye**duole。”“guanfangbuguan？jingchani？”woxiayishidiwen。

suxiaoxiangkanshaziyiyangkanlewoyiyan：“nizenmebaojing？shuoninengkandaoguaiwu？

haishiyougeappbinichapingsharen？jingchazhihuibanidangchengjingshenbing。erqie，

wohuaiyi……youxideliliangzaiganraorenzhi，putongrenjishikandaoyixieyichang，

yehuixiayishidihulvehuozhezhaoliyouhelihua。

chufei……”tazhilezhichuangwai：“chufeiyichangxianxiangdaguimobaofa，xianshibeiyanzhongqinshi。

”woshunzhetadeshouzhikanqu，jieduimiandaloudejuxingledpingmushang，zhengzaibofangyejianxinwen。

nvzhuboyongzizhengqiangyuandeshengyinbobaozhe：“……jinri，

woshifashengduoqiyuanyinbumingdesiwangshijianjiexinganjian，jingfangtixingguangdashiminyejianjianshaowaichu，