wobuzhidaoshizenmehuishi，anlishuoneimeduopinglunbuzhiyuyixiaxiaoshideneimechedi。
danmawodepinglunxiaoshi，wohaishihenqingxingde。
qishiwangshangpuguangwoderenshuodeyesuanshishi，wodequepaoqilepeijing，yongdejiekouyeshishuotaqiong，tongshidangchupatabusixin，tachanzhewowenyuanyindeshihou，woshenzhizhijiedangzhexuexiaohenduotongxuemianshuozijiyaogenyouqianrenchuguole。
duiyuneixiebuyouhaopinglun，wodaowusuowei，yinweiwoyijingsile，wangshangneixieyanlunyeshangbudaowoduoshao，wojiudangwangyoukouhaile。
但是，我妈她……
yinweizheijitianwomazuozaidianshijiqiankanneixiepinglun，yanleijiumeiyoutingguo。
meiyounagemuqinnengjieshouzijinverbeiwanrenma。
tongyang，yemeiyounagenvernengjieshouzijimuqinzheiyangyizhizheiyangyinweizijiku。
woyiweizheijianshijiuzheimeguoqule，meixiangdaojiuchenjileliangtian，liangtianhoumawodepinglungengduole。
xuduowangyoushuokendingshiwopale，zaichuqianyapinglun，dajiakaishigezhongcaicewobeihoudejinzhushenfendiwei，deduoyouqiancainengzuodaoyixiazimoleneimeduopinglun。
wokandeyilianmeng，nandaozhenderuwangyousuoyan，yourenzaibangwo？danwojiajingjiyiban，wobingbujidezijiyouneimeyouqiandepengyou。
huoxushishizaishoubulewangyouzheibanmawo，yixiangbutaiwanshoujidewomajingranyequgegeshejiaopingtaizhucelezhanghao，ranhouzaiwangshangmeiyigemawodepinglunxiamianhuifu：“woshixiawandemama，wonvershigehaoguniang，nimennengbunengbiezheimemata，tahuinanguo。”
womadepinglunduibiwangshangqianqianwanwandewangyou，genbenbukanyiji，yixiajiubeiyanmeile。
danshiyinweiwomayizhiqieerbushedezaimeiyitiaomawodepinglunxiafazhetongyangdeneirong，henkuaijiuyourenzhuyidaotale。
kebingbushiyigehaoshi，meirenhuitiliangyigeburenshidemuqinhunvdexinqing。
renmenjixuma，shuowogaisi，haishangshengdaolianwomayiqima，shuowomayebushishenmehaoren，youqinv，biyouqimu。
tamenmawomeiguanxi，danshitamenmawoma，wozhenshiyitiaopinglundoumeibanfakanxiaqu，xinliqidaozhifateng。
danwujiyushi，yinweiwojinjinshigelinghun，woshenmeyezuobule，woshenzhiliangentamenzaiwangshangduimadouzuobudao。
jiexialaideyiduanshijian，wodexinqingdoupiqidiluo，juedezijimeiyong，zijimamadouhubuzhu。
zhenduiwangshangmatadehuayu，womayijudoumeiyoufanbo。
danzaizhenduiwangshangmawodehuayuxia，womajihubuxiuxidemeiyitiaodouqupinglun：“wonversuiransile，dantashigehaoguniang。”
我看着看着就哭了。
shenzhiyouxieguofendewangyou，yijingxunzhepinglunshuodewojiayiqiandezhuzhiguoqule。
xinghaowomazaojiubanjiale，caitaoguoyijie。
shiqingdezhuanzheshizaiyigelibaihou。
zhouweiyixierenshiwodelinjuzhidaozheijianshiqinghou，kaishifenfenzaiwangshangliuyan，“xiawanshigehaoguniang，erqietayijingsile，buyinggaibeidajiazheiyangma。”
manmande，weihuwodeshengyinyuelaiyueduo，youwodetongxue、laoshi、pengyou、linju……
erwomayouduoleyigerenwu，takuzhezaimeiyitiaoweihuwodepinglunxiamianzhenchengdeshuo“xiexie”。
shuoderenduole，manmandewangyouzhijianyekaishichuxianleyixiezhiyideshengyin，juededanfangmiantingcongyibianyanlunhuibuhuitaicaolv。
yanjianshiqingxingshifazhanbutaidui，neigezuikaishipinglunwodezhanghaobianchulaijixudaidong：shuowokendingshixiangbubeiaima，caikaishimaican，haishuowojingranwuchidaozhuangsi。