第二章 写小说死路一条!

这小说,

实在是太简单了!

或者说!

太拉胯了!

“diyizhang:daxiadiguo。

dierzhang:guwudegouxiang。

disanzhang:guwudefenji。

第四章:修炼。

第五章:修炼。

diliuzhang:zaicixiulian.....

.........”

yiluwangxiafanxiaqu,doushizheizhongbiaoti,yizhidaozuihouwanjie!

yizijikanxiaoshuoyimushixingdenengli,yejiandandesaoleyigedagai,

“古武等级划分:

lianti——lianqi——houtian——xiantian——zongshi——dazongshi——wusheng!”

“gushi,congdaxiaguwudiguokaishile......”

..........

wenbimianqiangcouhe,danshineirongpingpuzhixu,

wanquanmeiyourenhedequzhe,wanquanmeiyourenhedeqingjie!

meiyourenhedechuangyi,meiyourenhedeliangdian,jinshouzhizhileidegengshibucunzai!

fangfoshizaikanliushuizhang,shulaibao,cheguluhua!

“就这?”

不夸张的说,

zheibenshu,ruoshifadaoxiaofanqianshideneixiexiaoshuowangzhan,wulunshimoudian,moulu,mouqie,haishixinmeitishenmede.......

绝对没有火的可能!

jiulianqianyuedouqianyuebule!

jibianshiqianyuelenengshangjiashoufei,ruoshiyouyigerendingyue,jiusuanxiaofanshule!

taiwuqu,taikuzao,tailakuale!

说难听点,

给狗,狗都不看!

可是,

jiushizheibenxiaoshuo,quechuangzaojuxianleyigepangdadeguwudiguo,jiushizheibenwuqudexiaoshuo,rangquanshijiedongfangfanweineideshijiyirendoukanguo!

dangshixiezheibenxiaoshuodeshihou,zheigeshijiezhizhongjihuzhenggedongfangderendouzaizhuidu!

kexianghuobaoshouhuanyingdechengdu!

萧帆环视四周,

tongxuemendouzaiyueduzheibenxiaoshuo!

tiandaoxiaoshuopingtaizhishang,suoyoudexiaoshuodoubukeyixiazai,zhinengzaipingtaizhishangfufeiguankan,ruoshiyongqitafangshidaobanruxianshiliuchuan,huizaodaoyanzhongdetiandaochengfa!

zhibuguoyiwujiaoyudexiaoshuoyouxieteshu,shiguojiazhengtihefaxiazaixialaide,xingchengleyiwujiaoyudekeben。

meinvbanhuatongzhuoyunduoermiansetonghong,xianranshikandeshifenjidong!

zhouweidetongxuemen,yedoushizaiyueduzheiben《daxiaguwu》,doukanderexuefeiteng!

“好看!”

“taihaokanle,kandeworexuefeiteng!”

“guwuxiaoshuotaijingcaile,xiwangduwanzheijizhang,wodeshentisuzhinenggengjinyibu,dadaoxuerushuiyin,shihuzhilidechengdu!”

“zuiqiangdewushengyouzhenlongzhili,ludizhenshen,yiquankeduanshanyue,kefenhaishui,shentibuxiubumie,shenmeshihouwonengyueduchengsheng!?”

“biexiangle,duxiaoshuoyeshidefenwuxinghetianfude,youderenduyibianxiaoshuojiunengdadaolianqidianfeng,youderenduyibaibianyedabudaoliantidengji!”

..........

萧帆笑了了,

yaobushiyinweifashengzaiyanqian,tadouhuiyiweizheixierenshizheibenshudetuo。

这玩意真的好看?

tacongkezhuozhizhong,zaicichouchulai《daguojijian》《kejishidai》dengxiaoshuo......

zheixiexiaoshuo,doushidaxiaguodegenji,《daxiaguwu》weidaxiatigonglewuqiongwujindezhanshiqiangzhe,tamenzhenshoubianguan,diyuqitaguojia,diyuhaiyangdeyuwaishengwu。

《daguojijian》tigongjiguojiawujinjijian,jichusheshi,daolujiaotong,guangshawanqian。

《kejishidai》weiguojiatigonglezhongduokeji,liguolimin.....

zheijibenxiaoshuo,shidaxiaguominbiduzhiwu,yeshijiaoyudehexin......

结果.......

同样的枯燥,乏味!

“tainankanle,zheiwanyinengyourenkandejinqu?”

xiaofankanxiangleshenbiandexiaohuatongzhuoyunduoer。

“neige......”

“woxiangwenyixia......”

“zheixiexiaoshuo,zhendehaokanma?”

“jiranxiexiaoshuoneimelihai,weihebuzijixieni?”

yunduoercishidebiaoqingbiandewubizhenjing,

美目猛地瞪大,

yiyizhongfeiyisuosinanyizhixindebiaoqingkanzhexiaofan!

“xie.....xiexiaoshuo?”

“不是吧!”

“nifengleba,xiangdoubuganxiang!”

云朵儿压低了声音,

“quanqiushangbaiyirenkou,wodaxiajiuyouershiduoyi,”

“danshizheiershiyirenkouzhizhong,quezhiyoujiwanrenyouxiexiaoshuodetianfu......”

“xiexiaoshuoxuyaohetiandaopingtaiqianyue,guangshizheiqianyuedemenlanjiugaodelipu。wanquanhexiaoshuodezhiliangguagou。”

“muqianquandaxiacaizhiyouliangsanwandeqianyuezuozhe。”

“hezongrenkoudebilishishiwanbiyi!”

yunduoeryanzhongluchunongzhongdechongbaizhiqing,qianyuezuozhe,neijiushiyaobukejideshenle!

“yigeqianyuezuozhe,keyirangwomenzheiyigehangchengshideshizhangdouyingweizuoshangbinle!”

“neishijigaodediwei!”

“erqie,bushiniqianyuelejiuchenggongle,”

“qianyuezhishiyigemenjian!”

“liangsanwanqianyuezuozhe,zhiyoushaoyibancainengdadaoshangjiashoufeidezige。”

“dadaoshangjiazuozhedezige,qishanghaiyouqingtongzuozhe,baiyinzuozhe,huangjinzuozhe,dashenzuozhe,baijinzuozhedequfen......”

“gengshiyouzhizunzuozhedezuigaodengji......”

“meiyibudounanrudengtian!”

“baiyinzuozhecaikeyikaishijuxianxiaoshuozhongdeshiwu,baijinzuozhecaikeyichuangzaowanzhengdeshijie!”

“xiexiaoshuoxuyaojingrendetianfu,baiwanlitiaoyi,putongrenxiexiaoshuo,neishisiluyitiao!”

yunduoerduizhexiaofanshuodao。

zheigebiaoqing,xiaofanjianguo,gaozhongdeshihoutashuozijijianglaizuoyuhangyuan,banzhurenjiushizheimekantade。

sikaolehenjiu,xiaofanzhongyumingbaiguolai,

zheigeshijiedexiaoshuoshuiping,haitingliuzaiyoueryuandejieduan!

“renmenduixiaoshuodelijietaiguoqianbo,meiyounaodong,meiyouchuangyi,meiyoujuqing......”

“meirenhezhuangbidalian.......”

“ruguo......”

“ruguo.......wobaqianshideneixiexiaoshuo.......”

“douxiedaozheitiandaoxiaoshuopingtai,huifashengshenme!?”

萧帆眯起了眼睛!

zheigeshijiexiaoshuoshiyoueryuanshuiping,meiyouchuangzaoli,meiyouliangdian......

但是,

zijiqianshideneixiexiaoshuo,kedoushidengfengzaoji!

xuanhuan,honghuang,kehuan,doushi,aimei,naodong......

gezhongwenticengchubuqiong......

shenmeyihuo,shenmedouluo,shenmezhanshen,shenmehonghuangxiyou,shenmeyetiandihenren......

ruoshibazheixiexiaoshuonachulai,qibushijiangweidaji!?

整个全球,

岂不是直接疯了!?

“daoshihou,wohuibuhuizhijieyishufengshen,yishubaijin!?”

萧帆激动了起来!

“buguo......”

“wentishi,zheixiexiaoshuo,wosuirankanguo,danshibutaihaoxiechulai.....”

“kanguohexiechulaishiliangmashi......”

“nandaochuanyuedaozheimeshenqideshijie,woqueyaodangyigekubidemazigong?”

就在这个时候!

xiaofannaohaizhizhonghuranyidong,yigenuodadekongjiandakai!

“zheishi.......”

“zheishiwoshoujidechucun?”

zheizhengshixiaofanshoujideneicunkongjian,shijiniandeshijian,tayuedulejiwanbenxiaoshuo,baokuowuxia,xuanhuan,qihuan,doushidenggezhongfengge!

linlinzongzong,jihuquanwanghuode,huoguodexiaoshuo,douchucunzaizheikongjianzhizhong!

“fadale......”

“zheixia,zhendefadale!”