第6章 《陈氏编导法则》

《chenshibiandaofaze》dijiutiao——

chuangzaobingfazhanyigeqingjie,hexinzaiyushezhimaodunchongtu,ruguogushibenshendemaodunganbuqianghuozhebugouzhuaren,neijiuzhizao‘wuhui’laituidongqingjiefazhan。

chenlingnaohaizhongshanguozijiqianshidangbiandaoshi,toutouguinazongjiedejitiaofaze,mouzhongshanguoyimoxiaoyi。

【观众期待值+3】

【dangqianqidaizhi:32%】

kandaodoujiangzhongshanguozheiliangxingzideshunjian,chenlingjiuzhidaozijicaiduile。

zhaoshudebiaoqingrouyankejiandejiangying。

tacuoedekanzhechenling,zhenggerenxianshimangran,ranhouzhenjing,zuihouxianrusiyibandechenmo……

“zhaoshu,wodayingxiaoyibangtabaomide……danshunijiuxiaoyizheiyigeerzi,kendingxiangzhetanengjininchuanchengxianghuo……erqietalaoshigenlingyigenanshenghunzaiyiqi,zhendehuiyingxiangxueye。”

chenlingtanlekouqi,“jintianwohaikandao,tazuozaineinanshengdechehouzuo,xiaodebuzhidaoyouduokaixin……”

zhaoshudeshentiweiweizhandouqilai,shuangshourenbuzhuzuanquan,huxiyuefacuzhong。

“hao……shuzhidaole。”zhaoshulianshangnulijichuyisixiaorong,kanqilaiyouxieshenren,“xiexiea,aling。”

“duileshu,zheishiwodayingxiaoyiyaobaomi,suoyiniqianwanbunenggentashuoshiwogaosunide……”

“放心,叔知道。”

chenlinghewanzuihouyikoudoujiang,biangenzhaoshugaobie,likaipuzi。

erzhaoshuquexiangshimeitingjianban,menzhetouzaiwulizhaozheshenme,jifenzhonghoutacongjiaoluotaochuyigenquantoucudegunzi,huanhuanzuozaidianmenkoudebandengshang。

yizhenhanfengfuguojiedao,chuiqizhaoshuweishubuduodejigentoufa,yuneigenzhanmanhanshuideedingmaojin,

tajiuanjingdezuozainei,danshouyonggunzichudi,manshixuesideyanmousisidingzhejiedaojintou,xiangjileyiweishaqifangundedajiangjun!

chenlingkansilikaijiedao,shizetoutoucongxiangdaoraolehuilai,tazhanzaijiaoluodeshuyinxia,zhenghaonengkandaodianpuquanmao。

jifenzhonghou,yiliangsanlunchehuanghuangyouyoudecongdaolujintoushilai。

zhaoyiqiaozheerlangtuizuozaichebian,shenhouliangtongyandouyijingsadeganganjingjing,tabawanzheshouzhonggangzhuanlaidejimeitongbi,xiaodezuijiaodoukuailiedaoergen。

“hei,zhuanqianyemeineimenanma。”

“yige,nidangranbunana,qiyizhengtianchederenshiwo!”qianmiandeshaonianzhanqishen,yonglidedengzhesanlunche,qichuanyuyudeshuodao。

“doushizijiaxiongdi,fenshenmeniwo。”

zhaoyicongzhangjiannachuliangmeitongbi,saidaoleshaoniankoudaili,“re,jinide。”

buyuanchu,kandaozhaoyizhudongmoshaonianyaozhidezhaoshu,yanpirenbuzhuyitiao。

“yige,wojiniqileyitiandeche,jiujiliangkuaia??”shaoniandengdaleyanjing,“nibushicongluguanjuneilingleershima!”

“qicheshitilihuo,sayanshijishuhuo,wodangrandefenduodian。”

zhaoyilanyangyangdehuileju,ranhouzongshencongsanluncheshangyuexia,miyanxiaozhechongshaonianhuilehuishou,“mingtianwozailaodifangdengni……yaoshiganbulai,laozijianniyicidaniyici,mingbaima?”

shuowan,tajiangshengyushibameitongbiquanzuanshouli,angshoutingxiongdechaozijiadianpuzouqu。

qichedeshaonianfennudekanxiangta,kesuizhezhaoyixiongedeyiyandenghuiqu,dunshisongle,zhinengchuitousangqijixudengjiaotaban,duzihuijia。

hanshuangjiedeshaonianebazhaoyi,zainianqingyibeizhongjihumeirenganre,qicheshaonianbeirenbaipiaoyitian,tayezhinengyaosuileyawangduziliyan。

“laodie,wohuilaile!!”

zhaoyimaizhedabu,shouwoshibatongbi,tahuijiaconglaimeizheimezixinguo。

danbuzhiweihe,tagangzoudaodianmenkou,jiuganshoudaoyiguhanyipumianerlai。

shouwomugundeshenyinghuanhuanzhanqishen,qifenzhouranjiangzhibingdian,zhaoshuneishuangnumousuodingzhaoyi,xiangshishouwozhangqiangdejiangjun,qishixiongxiongdexiangtazoulai。

“lao……laodie?”zhaoyikandaoneigengunzi,xiayishidexianghoutuileyibu。

“jiushita,shima?”zhaoshuyizhishouzhizhehangchihangchiqicheyuanqudeshaonian,qideshoudouzaiduosuo,“xiaowangbadanzi!xuexibuhaohaoxue,jiujiwotoutoumomogaozheixie?!”

“nishuoniyaoshizhengerbajinggennvwawatangelianaijiusuanle,nitamajiuzhaogenande?”

“nandenengjinishenghaizima?!nengjiwomenlaozhaojiachuanzongjiedaima!!”

“nishixiangjuelenilaodiedezhonga!!”

zhaoshuyibianpokoudama,yibianlinzhegunzifengkuangzhuishazhaoyi,houzhebeidatengdeaoaozhijiao。

tingdaozhaoshudenumasheng,bantiaojieshangdelinjuerduodoushuqilaile。

tamenhaoqideweizaifujin,kaishiduibeizhuishadezhaoyizhizhidiandian,buzhibicishuolexieshenme,lianshangtongshifuxianchuzhenjingzhise。

【guanzhongqidaizhi+1……+1……+1……】

suizhezhaoyibeidadeaoaozhijiao,chenlingyanqiandeshuzikaishibutingtiaodong。

ruguotanengzaicijinrunaohaizhongdejuyuan,jiunengkandaoneimimimamadeheiying“guanzhong”,zhengraoyouxingzhidekanzhezheiyimu,zuijiaodaizheweimiaodexiaoyi。

“maodunduile……danchuchangrenwuhaibugou。”chenlingdemuguangluozaiyuanchudesanluncheshang。

“小六。”

tingdaochenlingdehuhuan,zhengzaimangranchiguadeqicheshaonianzhuanguotoulai。

“alingge,niyezaizheia?”

“nimenjintianqurongxue,xiaoyijileniduoshaoqian?”

“……liangkuai。”tidaozheige,shaonianlianshangjiufuxianchuyuanfen,“tachuerfaner,benlaishuorangwoqiche,zhuanleqianfenwodatou,jieguojiujilezheimedian,haiweixiewomingtianjixujitadangkuli……”

“nixiangbaofutama?”chenlingzhushizhetadeyanjing,“huozheshuo,nixiangrangtayihouzaiyebuganqifuni,shenzhijianlenidouraozhezouma?”

“想!!”

“那我教你……”

jiuzailiangrenqieqiesiyuzhiji,zhaoyiyijingbeizhuidepibeibukan。

“laodie,laodiebiedale!wozhenmeigaojia!”zhaoyizongsuanshifanyingguolai,pinmingjieshizhe,“wofashi,wozhaoyiyizhidouzhixihuannvren!youqishifengmanyouyunweideneizhong……”

weiguanzhongrendezuibaweiweizhangda,ruoyousuosi。

zhaoshuyileng,jiaobudunshimanlexialai,

“neinigenqicheneinanwawa,shishenmeguanxi?”

“womenjiushiputongpengyoua!”

“你说真的?”

“当然是真……”

“xiaoyige!”yigeshaonianshenyingbokairenqun,fenglebanchongdaozhaoyishenbian,zhangkaishuangbeibaozhuzhaoyideshenti,yonghoubeititadangxiamugun。

赵乙愣住了。

赵叔也愣住了。

“ni……”zhaoyizhijuededanaoyipiankongbai。

budengzhaoyikaikou,neishaonianbiandingzhetonghongdeyanjing,duizhaoshudashengkaikou:

“yaodajiudawoba!buxudawoxiaoyige!!!”

气氛骤然死寂!

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