手握炮灰剧本?大佬们为我撕剧本!第1章

yishi,shizaiyizhenjianruideerminghejuliedetoutongzhong,rutongchenchuanbanjiannanfuchushuimiande。

sunianzuihouyigeqingxidejiyi,shizuowei“xuanzhuanniuma”hou,xinzangzhouranchuanlaideyizhenzhimingjiaotong,yanqiandiannaopingmushangmimimamadewenzishunjianbeiheiantunshi。

zaizhengyan,yingruyanliandebushiyiyuancanbaidetianhuaban,yebushiyincaodifudesenluodian,ershiyizhong……jidushehua,shenzhishehuadaoyouxiefukuadehuanjing。

diaohuafanfudetianhuabanchuixiashuijingdiaodeng,zheshechucimudeguang。shenxiashirouruandeguofendesirongshafa,kongqilimimanzheyizhongtiannidetanxiang,hunzazhemouzhongtacongweiwenguode、shuyushechipindedutexiangqi。

tamengdizuoqishen,ditoukanxiangziji。

buzaishineijianchuandaoxidefabaidegezichenshanheniuziku,ershiyitiaojiancaijingzhi、zhidirouruandehongselianyiqun,qunbaizhuizhexixiaodezhenzhu。shouwanshangdaizheyizhikanqilaijiujiagebufeidezuanshishoulian,shouzhixianxibaixi,zhijiaxiujiandeyuanrun,tuzhedandandeluosejiayou。

zheibushitadeshou。zheishuangshoucongweijingliguoaoyexiehuodongfangandepibei,gengmeiyouyinzhangqiqiaojianpanershengchudebojian。

“zheishi……nali?”tanannanziyu,shengyindaizheyisimoshengdejiaorou。

【ding——!jiancedaosuzhuyishiyisuxing。】

yigebingleng、haowuganqingdedianziyintuwudizaitanaohaizhongxiangqi。

【“edunvpeizijiuxitong”zhengzaijihuo……bangdingzhong……bangdingchenggong!】

【suzhu:sunian(dangqianshenfen:sushijituanqianjin,22sui)】

【renwushijie:《haomenzongcaidenixi》】

【dangqianjiaose:edunvpei·sunian】

【zhuxianrenwu:yangezunxunxitongtigongdejuben,zouwanedunvpeisuoyouqingjiejiedian,baokuodanbuxianyuxiurunanzhu、dayananzhu、chichannanzhu、zuizhongbeinixichenggongdenanzhubaofuzhijiaporenwang。renwuwanchenghou,jikehuode10000jifen,bingchuansonghuiyuanshijie,huifujiankangshengming。】

【jinggao:budexiangrenheshijieneirenwutouluxitongjirenwuxinxi!budedafupianlijubenxingwei!fouzejiangshiweirenwushibai,suzhulinghunjikemosha!】

yilianchuandexinxirutongbingzhui,henhenzaojinsuniandenaohai,rangtashunjianjiangzaiyuandi。

xitong?kuaichuan?edunvpei?jiaporenwang?linghunmosha?

meiyigecihuidouchongjizhetazuoweiqianshechu、xianweiwuzhuyizhederenzhidixian。tayongliqialeyibazijidedatui,qingxidetongganchuanlai,gaosutazheibushimeng。

jihushitongshi,yigubushuyutade、pangzaerhunluandejiyisuipian,rutongjuedidehongshuibanyongrutadeyishi。

jiaozongrenxing、muzhongwurendesujiada**;duiyigejiaoluchenzhoudeqiongxueshengchimibuyi,queyinqiuerbudezhuaneryinaishenghen,jijinxiuruzhinengshi;sujiahouqizaishangchangshangbeinixijueqideluchenzhoufengkuangdaji,zuizhongpochan,fuqintiaolou,ertazheigeedunvpeizexiachangqican,beisongjinjingshenbingyuan……

jiyidezuihouyimu,shitadaizhebaobiao,jiangneigejiaoluchenzhoudenanshengduzaiyitiaopijingdehouxiangli……

【xinshourenwufabu:‘chuyuxiuru’。】

【renwudidian:suzhaiqiantinglangdao。】

【renwumubiao:duinanzhuluchenzhoujinxingjinqianxiuru,bingshuochuzhidingtaici。】

【renwushixian:10fenzhong。】

【renwujiangli:jifen+10。】

【shibaichengfa:linghunmosha。】

xitongdetishiyinzaicixiangqi,binglengercanku,burongzhiyi。

sunianshenxiyikouqi,qiangpozijilengjingxialai,tameiyouxuanzedeyudi。linghunmosha……takebuxiangsi,wulunshicusizaizijidegongweishang,haishimomingqimiaosizaizheigerenwushijieli。tabixuhuijia!

genjujiyihexitongdeweiruozhiyin,tazhanqishen,lveweishiyingleyixiajiaoxianeishuangzhishaoyoubalimidexigaogenxie,chaozhejiyizhongde“qiantinglangdao”zouqu。

jiaoxiadeditanrouruanxiyin,zoulangliangceguazhejiazhibufeideyouhua,zhenggekongjiandouzhangxianzhesujiadecaishi。ranercike,sunianzhijuedezheifulitanghuangxiangyizuojingzhidelaolong。

yuekaojinqianting,kongqisihuyuefaningzhi。

tafangqingjiaobu,zailangdaodeguaijiaochutinglexialai,weiweitanchutou。

看到了。

jiuzaiqianfangbuyuanchudeguangjiedalishidimianshang,zhanzheyigenianqingdenanzi。

tabeiduizheta,shenxingtingbaquelvexiandanbo,chuanzheyijianxidefabai、shenzhinengkandaoxiweimosunhenjidelansechenshan,xiashenshiyitiaojiandandeheisezhangku。yuzheishehuadehuanjinggegeburu。

zaitajiaobian,sanluozhejizhangzhanxinde、cimudebaiyuandachao。

suniandexinmengdiyichen。zheijiushineigejiedianle。yuanzhuganggangyijingshuaichuleqian,jinxinglediyilunxiuru。

sihushitingdaoletagaogenxiexiweideshengxiang,neigebeiyingdongledong,huanhuanzhuanguoshenlai。

yishunjian,sunianhuxiweizhi。

neishiyizhangjiqinianqing、queyejiqichusedelian。wuguanshensuiliti,meiguhengao,biliangtingzhi,xiahexiantiaoliuchangerqingxi。zhishitadelianseyouxiecangbai,ejiaodeweizhi,youyixiaokuaixinxiandecashang,zhenghuanhuanshenchuyisiyinhongdexueji,zaitaguoyubaixidepifushang,xiandegewaichumu。

zuirangtaxinjide,shitadeyanjing。

neishiyishuangjiqiyoushendeyanmou,xiangbujiandidehantan,limianmeiyoutayuxiangzhongdefennu、quru,huozheyinren,fanershiyizhongjinhupingjingde……chenji。fangfozhouweideyiqie,baokuotazheigeganggangxiuruguotaderen,douwufazaitayanzhongjiqisihaobolan。

tajiuneiyangjingjingdikanzheta,wushengwuxi,quedaizheyizhongyutacikeluopochujingquanranbufudeyapogan。

suniandexinzangzaixiongqianglifengkuangtiaodong,jihuyaozhuangsuitadeleigu。tazuanjinleweiweichuhandeshouxin,zhijiashenshenqiajinzhangxinderuanrouli,yongtengtonglaiqiangpozijijinruzhuangtai。

zouqingjie!bixuzouqingjie!

tanulihuiyizhexitongchuanshujitade、shuyuyuanzhudeneizhongyuchunyouaomandeshentai,weiweitaiqixiaba,muguangkeyibikaitaejiaodexuejiheneishuangguoyushensuideyanjing,nulirangzijideshengyintingqilaichongmanbuxieheshishe。

“喏,捡起来。”

shengyinchukou,daizheyisibuyichajuedezhandou,dantajinliwenzhule。

tashenshouzhizhesanluozaitajiaobiandechaopiao,anzhaojubenyaoqiu,shuochuleneijukebodetaici:“gounizheizhongxiadengrenzhengbannianleba?nazhe,gunyuandian,biezanglewojiadedifang。”

shuowanzuihouyigezi,tajihunengtingdaozijixueyechongshuaermodeshengyin。

空气仿佛凝固了。

yuxiangzhong,nanzhuyinggaihuiyinrendi、momodidunxiashen,jianqineixiedaibiaochirudechaopiao,ranhouchenmodilikai。zheishijubenlixiehaode,yeshixitongpandingrenwuwanchengdebiaozhun。

raner,luchenzhoumeiyoudong。

tashenzhimeiyouditouqukanneixieqian。

tademuguang,rutongshizhibanluozaisuniandelianshang,daizheyizhongshenshi,yizhongtanjiu,rangtaganjuezijifangfobeibokailesuoyouweizhuang,wusuodunxing。

shijianyimiaoyimiaodiliushi,meiyimiaodouxiangyigeshijineimemanzhang。suniandejibeikaishifaliang,xitongdedaojishifangfojiuzaierbiandidazuoxiang。

jiuzaitajihuyaochengbuzhuzheiguiyidechenmoshi,luchenzhouzhongyudongle。

tabushidunxia,ershixiangqianmaileyibu。

neishuangzhanzhenidian、queyijiunengkanchuzhidishangchengdejiupixie,jingzhundicaizaileyizhanghongsedezhibishang,fachuqingweidemocasheng。

他朝她逼近了一步。

liangrenzhijiandejulishunjianlajin,sunianshenzhinengwendaotashenshangdandande、hunhezhezaojiaoqinglieheyisiruoyouruowuxuexingqideweidao。tabudebutaiqitou,cainengduishangtadeshixian。

tabitagaochuyigetouhaiduo,zheiyangjindejuli,taxuyaoyangshita,zheirangtagandaoyizhongqiansuoweiyoudeyapohe……weixian。

ranhou,takandaoluchenzhoutaiqileshou。

tayongzhiguanjie,manbujingxindi、shenzhidaizhediansuiyidi,caguoxiahexian,jiangneiyisijiangluoweiluodexuehenmokai,zaicangbaidepifushangliuxiayidaodandandehonghen。

zheigedongzuo,yexing,congrong,yutacike“beixiuruzhe”deshenfenxingchenglejiqiqiangliedefancha。

takanzheta,zuijiaojiqing、jihuandiqianqileyigehudu。

neibushixiao,zhishaobuquanshi。neigengxiangshiyizhong……queren,huozheshuo,shimouzhongyouxikaishidexinhao。

tadeshengyinbugao,shenzhiyouxiedichenshaya,queziziqingxi,rutongbingzhuzaluozaiyupanshang,qiaozaisuniandexinjian:

“苏大**。”

tadunledun,neishuangshenbujiandideyanmouli,sihulveguoyisijidande、nanyibuzhuodexingwei。

“niqueding,”taweiweiwaitou,muguangsuozhutaqiangzuozhendingdeyanjing,“yaohewowanzheigeyouxi?”

“轰——!”

suniandenaozixiangshibeitouruleyikezhadan,shunjianyipiankongbai。

jubenlimeiyouzheiju!xitongchuanshujitadejiyisuipianliyemeiyou!zheiwanquanchaochuletadeyuliaohezhangkong!

“youxi”?tayongle“youxi”zheigeci?tashishenmeyisi?takanchuleshenme?haishi……zheizhishitayizhongyinrendaojizhihouniuqudefanji?

judadekonghuangrutongbinglengdechaoshui,shunjianyanmeileta。taganjuezijidexueyedoukuaiyaoninggule。

xitongzaitanaohailianjingdekepa,meiyourenhetishi,meiyourenhejieshi。

tabunengluxian!bunengrangtakanchupozhan!

sunianqiangyaxiajihuyaotuokouerchudejinghu,yongjinlequanshendeliqi,caiweichizhulianshangneifuaomanyouyuchundebiaoqing,tashenzhinulidi、henhendidengletayiyan,shituyongselineirenlaiyangaineixindejingtaohailang。

tashenmedoumeishuo,huozheshuo,tagenbenbuzhidaocikegaishuoshenme。jubenlimeiyoujiaotayingduizheizhongtufazhuangkuang。

tamengdizhuanguoshen,jihushiluohuangertao。xigaodexiegenqiaojizaiguangjiededalishidimianshang,fachulingluanerjicude“dada”sheng,zaikongkuangdelangdaolihuidang,qingxidibaoluletaneixindehuangluanhewucuo,yutagangcaikeyiyingzaodexiaozhangqiyanxingchenglekexiaodeduibi。

zhidaoguaiguowan,chedituolileluchenzhoudeshixianfanwei,suniancaibeikaozhebingliangdeqiangbi,dakoudakoudichuanzheqi,xiongkoujulieqifu,fangfoganggangjinglileyichangshengsibodou。

ejiaoshenchuximidelenghan,shouxinyipianshiru。

neigeyanshen……neijuhua……

【ding——!xinshourenwu‘chuyuxiuru’wancheng。jifen+10。dangqianzongjifen:10。】

xitongdetishiyinzhongyushanshanlaichi,binglengyijiu,querangsunianxuanzhedexinshaoweiluoxialeyidian。

renwuwanchengle。zhishao,tahuoguolediyiguan。

keshi,luchenzhouzuihouneigeyanshen,neiju“niquedingyaowanzheigeyouxi?”,quexiangyigenbinglengdezhen,shenshenzhajinletadexindi,dailaiyizhongqiangliedebuanyugan。

zheigenanren,genbenbuxiangjubenlixiedeneigeqianqizhihuiyinren、houqifengkuangbaofudebianpinghuananzhu。

他太危险了。

sunianbishangyan,shenxileyikouchongchizheshehuatanxiangdekongqi,zaizhengkaishi,yandizhishengxiayipianbinglengdejueran。

wuluntashishenme,wulunqianluruhe,weilehuoxiaqu,weilehuijia,zheichang“xi”,tadoubixuyingzhetoupi,yanxiaqu。

zhishi,naohailineigecazhexueji、daizhewanweixiaorongdeshaonianshenying,yijineijuyiweishenzhangdefanwen,rutongmengyanban,huizhibuqu。

【tahaoxiang,hejubenlixiedebuyiyang?】