fumuzhijiandechenmorangzaohuidehuijieerbugandongkuaizi，cailiangsuibandesanjieerquebudongzheixie，kanzheyizhuozidemeiweitagaoxingdeshouwuzudao。
谢婉莹越看越心酸。
lianggejieertadoushijushuyanliguanjiaozhezhangdade，yangchengdexinggequejieranxiangfan。
bizhihuijieerdewenshunzibei，sangjieerzeshifentiaotuofanpan，fumuqinyueburangzuoshenmeyueyaozuoshenme，youyinweiyougeshenjugaoweidefuqin，zhenggejingdoudouduitabizhibuji，dinghunyejiweibushun，jibianshixiajiadoumeiyouyuanyide。
houlaiyoudezhilezhangjielishidexiaoxi，tamenjiemeiganqingshenhou，sangjieergengshibayiqiedouguijiuyuxiewanyingdetoushang，henhendikongsulexiewanyingzheixienianshiruhepianxinhaogeer，youshiruhekekediduidaitamenjiemeide，cihoubiangengjiafangrenzijiduoluo，zuihoujingzuisizailejiuchizili。
zhici，shangyishidexiewanyingyibingbuqi。
cishidesangjieerhaihuopozhe，yinzhehaibudaosansui，suoyixiewanyingchulezaichishishangguanshuledianyiwai，biedefangmianbingmeiyouduoguanjiao。
xiewanyingrangyuhujiliangweijieerbucai，sangjieerxiangaogaoxingxingdichile，tatianshengweikoujiuhao，jishenmedouchidehuanxi，zhuyeyijingyongdehenhao，rouroudexiaoshounazheyishuangzhangzhangdekuaizi，chideshifenrenzhen。
huijieerquebugandongkuai，taheiputaosideyanjingcongfuqinhemuqindelianshangkanlaikanqu，qiaoqiaoyanlekoukoushui。
zheishiguiju，sangjieerbudong，taquezaojiukaishixuele。
“haiyaowoqingnidongkuaizi？”
xiewanyingkanxiangduimiandeshenzhixing。
shenzhixingfanersongleyikouqi，zheicaiduima，zheicaishitadeqi，suishuotahenmanyixianzaimucizixiaodechangmian，danyaoshitaiguofanchangtajiugaipale。
chileyikoucaihaoranghuijieerdonglekuaizhihou，shenzhixingyoujuedenalibuduijingle。
xiewanyingchuanlejianshuilansedexiuhuabeizi，limianshiyitiaosusezhangqun，wufaheiliangxiuli，weishifendai，chuqulianseyouxiesubai，zhenggerenkanzhewenwanlexuduo。
wulinuanhe，zheiyangchuandaoyebuhuileng。
zheiduanrizishentibujia，xiewanyingweilebuzairenqianshiruo，changyinongzhuanghoufenjianren，rucizheiban，shenzhixingdaojuedekanzhexinlishutanduole。
可还是有哪里不对。
shenzhixingduomexizhiyigeren，tahenkuaijiujuechachulebuduidedaodishinalile，shixieshideshentai。
chuquezhuangrong，xieshizheigerenyeshichangyansuzheyizhanglian，taguanzheyizhenggejia，shenjingchangniandoushijinbengzhede。
cishitademianrongshuzhan，muguangpinghe，jiuhaosiyizhizhamaodemaoerbeifupinglemaofa，zaiyangguangxiayonglandeshaizhedupier。
xiewanyingyaozhidaoshenzhixingzaixiangshenme，dinghuiyoubaishangtayiyan。
tashangyishiqushiqianhaodaishizuolejinianzaixiangfurende，zenmedouduanlianchulaile，zheidianxiaoshi，yijingbuzuyirangtaxinsiyourenhebodongle。
erqieyaoshuoyoushenmexinqingbianhua，neiyezhishikuaihuoerzile。
zhishizhonglaiyishi，tademuguangyebuzaizhangfushenshang，zhiyixinguanzhuzijidehaizimen。
shenzhixinghuranwen：“zenmemeijiaohaogeerlai？”
lianggeqinshengdenverdouzai，weiyouguojilaideerzimeilai，shenzhixingpaxiarenjiaoshe。
dantameihuaiyiguozheishixieshiguyiweizhi，xieshideweirentazuiqingchu，taxianglaiqingqingbaibai，yiwanshuiduandepingpingzhengzheng，shenzhiyinweihaogeershinanhai，zuorigengshitedijiaoletajijingdouxiexin，qingyiweimingshiguolaizhuanmenjiaodao。
shuoqilai，xinhaimeixie，shenzhixingxinxiangwanshangwubiyaoxiele，xieshijinribenjiubushuang，tagaizuoxietaotakaixindeshi。
xiewanyingmeixiangzhejiuzheiyangbahaogeertuichuqu。
hefenjiayiyang，duanshijianneixunsuwancheng，zheibuxianshi。
haogeershixinglezhengerbajingdelishoujinlaide，liangbianzupudougailede。
erqiexiewanyingxiangqiasizijideshi，dangchuquanshenzhixingjienahaogeertakemopolezuipizi，sheizhidaoyangletoubaiyanlangchulai？
tadandandao：“huijieeryebushiwotedixunlaide，haogeerhetashuowobingle，talaikankanwobale，sangjieershiyuanbenjiumeitiandouzaiwozheichi。”
shenzhixingweiweizhoulemei，“haogeerni，meilaikankanni？”
haogeernenggaosuhuijieershuomingtayeshizhidaode，muqinbingle，buguolaiwenhouyiju？
xiewanyingshuo：“buzhi，xushixianwozuijinjitadegongkeduolexie，youhuoxushipawoguolebingqijita。”
shenzhixing：“tajichutiaojianboruo，kaihuiwan，buduozuogongkezenmexing？jingyincijiubulaikanni？xiaciwohuihaohaoshuojiaota。”
“erqietazuoerzidezennengxianzijidemuqinyouji？shishubugai。”
xiewanyingjurancongshenzhixingruyubandelianshangkanjianlebuyue。
tashixingzijihaoyiren，zheidianxiaoshi，tabugaizaihucaidui。
yizhikeyibuxiangkanta，kekanlezhihouxiewanyingyoubuxiangnuokaimuguangle。
zhuangyuanlangdexiangmaoshijihaode，jiashangtayizhijianchizaochenlianwuqiangshenjianti，qishiyizhidaodaotasideshihoushenzhixingdoubaoyangdehenhao。
kesishiduodeshenzhixingnayouershisansuideshenzhixingshengdehao？shentishangdejianshuoqueshixiangchawuji，dannianqingdemiankongxianrangenglingtashangxinyuemu。
qietaneishiweilekanshangqugengjiayansuzhengjing，haikaishixuqilehuzi，xiewanyingqidebataganchufangshuileyigeyue，zhidaokanxiguan。
mianqiandeshenzhixingqingjuanwenhe，junzipianpian，qietasuiweiwenguan，queyouxiwujiantidexiguan，weiyandeguanfuzhixia，shijieshidexiongtang，kuankuodejianbang，jingshoudeyaofu。
shangyishidezheishijiexiadexianxi，yizhiyuzhihouliangrenzhijianyezongyougehe，suinenghaoshengxiangchuqie，quedaburucongqian。
shuojuxinlihua，shenzhixingduitabubo，shenzhishifenshuncong，dangran，tayecongbuzuoyujudeshiqing。
zheiyishi，tabujinzijiyaohaohaodaihaozijidesangehaizi，yeyaozhuajinzhangfudexin。
qizideningshirangshenzhixingrenbuzhuwen：“wolianshangyoudongxi？”
xiewanyingsuiyihuida：“kannihaokan，duokanyihuier。”
lingtameixiangdaodeshinianqingshijisuideshenzhixingjinghaishigehuihaixiudenanren，tahongleergen，nakailesangjieerdewankuaiburangtaduochijishi，“meigezhengjing，haizimendouzaini。”
jiusuanhaizimenbuzai，yahuanmenyezaia，shenzhixingdoukanjianjingmeibiexiaobiehonglelian。
xiewanyingrangyahuanmenbadongxichexiaqu，youhuanyuhuquqinglaolangzhonglai。
shenzhixingzebafanhoufankunsangjieerjilenainiangdaizhesangjieerhuiqule，youjiaolehuijieerquxiuxi，ranhouhexiewanyingyiqiqianwangxixiangfang。
fuqibingjianerzou，shenzhixingchuimoukanlexiewanyinghaoyihuier，ningshengshuo：“baitianneishiwotingshuole，qishi......”
xiewanyingbuxiangtingzheirenshuoneixiedadaoli，youqishizaizheigeshihou，“youshiwanshangzaishuo。”
shenzhixingjuedeyeyoudaoli，liangrenzaifangli，shuoshenmedoufangbian，zaiwaimianhaiyaogujihuibuhuibeitinglequ：“hao，nideshenziyaojin。”