“对！展开说说。”
“ri，nimenzaishuoshenme，wozenmetingbudonga。”
“花卷可还行。”
“wobuchunjiele，shuodaohuajuandeshihou，wonaozilizidongjiunaobuchulaile。”
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pinglunqudeshuyoudouzaiwangeng。
erzheishihou，queyeyouyigeshuyoutichuleyigefeichangyansudewenti：“wojuedezheiqizhongyougeloudonga，zheigeaitoudianpingchedelagenanrensuiranshuoshinadaolejuzi，danshijukaijianyutiechuangdeshihou，kendingshihuichanshengshengyina，zheishengyingaizenmechuli？buhuibeifaxiandema？”
erkandaozheitiaoshuyoudepinglun，shupingqudeqitashuyoumenyedoushixintouyidong。
“si，nishuodezheigewentihaizhendeshigedawentia。”
“zheiyangshuodehua，nadaojuzi，yeshibaidalea。”
“woyougebanfa，neijiushiranghuajuangechuma。”
【aihedianxiaozhiketangjiangdedalige】：“sheishihuajuange？”
“haha，woyexiangdaole，keyiyongzijidehuajuan，**limiandesuoyouren，rangzheixierentingerbuwen。”
“nizheishiyaoleisidaligea，yaozhendeshineiyangdehua，daligebujiuchenglezhenzhengdehuajuanlea。”
【aihedianxiaozhiketangjiangdedalige】：“......”
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微机室内。
idweiaitoudianpingchedelagenanrendelaozhou，kanzhepinglunqushuyoumendepinglun，yeshibuyoudezhouqilemeitou，zheiqueshishigewentia。
erxiayishide，takanxianglejiugenzijizaitongyigeweijishineidedalige。
sihuzaisikaoshuyoumendejianyikebukexing。
erdaligezheihuieryezhenghaotaiqitoulai，zhuyidaolelaozhoudemuguang，buyoude，tazuijiaodouchouchuleliangxia。
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ercishi，lijunshengyeshikanzhepinglunqushuyoumendepinglun。
taqishiyijingbazheige【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】suoshuodezhunbeiyueyudeshiqing，yedangchengleyigemoniyouxizaiwan。
erkandaoshuyoumendepinglun，tayeshisikaoleqilai，jimiaozhonghou，tadeyanjingjiushiyiliang。
他想到了。
‘qishi......’
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erpinglunqudeshuyouyeyourenxiangdaole：“qishi，zuozhelisheng，yijingbafangfaxiedaole《yueyu》zheibenxiaoshuolia。”
zheishuyousuijibianshijiangyuanwentiedaoleshupingquzhong。
【‘jintianwozaishengchanqunadaolejuzi，keshijuzijukaijianyuchuanghudeshihou，chanshengdeshengyingaizenmeban？’
dangzheigeniantoufuxianzailishengnaohaizhongdeshihou，tajiuxiayishidichaozhechuangwaikanqu。
眼神就是一闪。
yexushitianyi，yeyexushiqiaohe，jiuzaitasuozaidediyizhongxinjianyuwai，shiyijiamingjiaolingjiadegangtiechang。
zheishishuichengdeyijiadaxinggangtiechang。
但这不是重点。
‘zhongdianshi，zheizuogangtiechangchanshengdezaoyin，jiangshiwoxingdongdezuihaoyanhu。’
xiangdaozhei，lishengdemuguangyuelaiyueliang。
......
‘meitianwodouhuijuyidian，ranhouxiaoxinyiyidijiangjukaidebufen，yangaizhu。’】
......
shuyoumenyedoutongguozheigeyuanwen，zhaodaolezheiyiduansuozaidezhangjie。
zaizheiyizhangzhong，xiangxidimiaoxiele《yueyu》zheibenshudezhujiaolisheng，zenmeliyongzaoyin，yidiandiandequjukaijianyudechuanghu，haibubeirenfaxian。
“si，haizhendeyoua，zheibushitianzhu【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】gendaligema？”
“牛逼了作者。”
“kao，wozenmejihulvelea，zheiqueshishigebanfaa。”
“（wulian）dajiadairudeyetaishenleba，biewangjile《yueyu》kejiushiyibenxiaoshuoa，naliyouneimeqiaoa。aitoudianpingchelaogesuozaidejianyufujin，bukenengzhendeyouyigedaxinggangtiechanga。”
“haha，wodoujiwanglezheichale，haishiloushangdeshuyouqingxinga。”
“taqingxinggejimaoa，tazheihuashuode，bujiushixiangxinleaitoudianpingchelaoge，gendaligezhendezaijianyuma？”
“haha，haizhenshini，woxianzaidoumilea，budandanshiba《yueyu》zheibenxiaoshuodeneirong，dangchenglezhendele，haibaaitoudianpingchelaogedezhenghuotie，jidangchengzhenshijinglilea。”
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cishi，lijunshengyeshiyileng，tafaxianzijihaizhendeyejiangaitoudianpingchedezheigelaogedetiezineirong，dangchengzhenshifashengdele。
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此时，微机室内。
看着书友们的评论。
【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】yejiushilaozhouyanshenqueshishanshuoleqilai。
erxiayishide，tatongguochuanghukanxiangleweijishiwaidemougefangxiang。
wengwengweng，yidaodaoshengyin，tongguochuanghudefengxijilejinlai。
zaitamuguangwangxiangdefangxiang，shiyijiamingjiaotianlindegangtiechang。
zhengzuogangtiechangjulitamenbusuanjinyebusuanyuan。
tianlingangtiechangzuoweiyizuogangtiechang，qishichanshengdezaoyinyebusuanda，shenzhiyinweixiguanlezheizaoyin，tamenzheixierendouyijingduizheizaoyinxiyiweichanglea。
zaishuo《yueyu》zheibenshudeshejidaogangtiechangzaoyindeneizhang。
zhiqiantaziranyekandaoneiyizhangle，danshiyinweizheiduanshijian，tafanfudikanzheibenshu，yizhiyudouyouxieshushiwudule，yejiuhulvelezheiyizhang。
yeduokuishishuyoumentixingta，burandehua，tahaizhendezijijiaojinnaozhidiquxiang，gaizenmebimianyongjuzijujianyuchuanghushihoufachudezaoyin。
suihou，laozhouyeshizhaodaole《yueyu》dexiangguanzhangjie，kanxianglezheizhangdeneirong。
zaizheizhangzhong，miaoshudezaoyin，gentamenjianyufujindeneizuogangtiechangdezaoyin，yeyouzhehendadexiangsixing，shengyindoubushihenda。
tamuguangtingdunzailemouyiduanxiangguanmiaoshushang。
【lingjiagangtiechangdezaoyinbuda，buzuyiwanquandeyangaizhujutiechuangdeshengyin，suoyixuyaoshuxizaoyindepinlv，zaijuchuanghudeshihou，jiangshengyingenzheipinlvronghe，zheiyangcaibuhuibeifaxian。】
kanzhezheiyiduan，tayanjingfaliang。
yuanlai，tadedaoshilisheng，yijingxianghaoleyiqie。
xiayishide，tayitaitou，genneizhangxiangmanlianhengrou，danqueshiyouxietiehanhanqizhide【dalige】laohong，duishileyiyan，yezaiduifangdeyanzhongkandaoleliangmang。
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qihoujitian，laozhoudouzaizhaojihui。
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某一天。
越狱书评区。
【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】：
“ganxiexiongdimenshangcidetixing。”
“zheijitian，meizaitieziligengxinneirong，jiushiwoyizhizaizhaojihui，shenqingzailaodongdeshihou，qudasaojianyu。”
“jintianwozhongyuzhaodaojihuile。”
“woanzhao《yueyu》zhongmiaoxie，zaidasaowanlehou，toutoudiyongjuzijuchuanghu。”
“danshiqingkuangbushitebieleguan，zhongsuozhouzhi，womenjianyufujindeneizuogangtiechangzaoyinbushihenda，suoyiwoanzhaowodaoshilishengjiaojidefangfa，jiangjujianyuchuanghudeshengyin，rongrudaogangtiechangdezaoshengzhong，kezheiyetainanle，wochadiandoubeifaxianle。wogennimenshuoshuodangshijutideqingkuang......”
【aihedianxiaozhiketangjiangdedalige】：“nihaishuoni，dangshiwojinibafeng，nineijuchuanghufachudezhigashengchadianbawohundouhechulai。”
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zheijitianshuyoumendouzainamen【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】laoge，weishabugengxinle。
xianzaikandaoduifangyougengxinletiezi，dunshibianshipaolejinlai。
“woyiweilaogeyihoubugengxinle。”
“zheimeqiao，laogesuozaidejianyufujinyeyouyizuogangtiechang？”
“zheijiuyoudianjialeba？”
“wocao，wozenmeganjuezheilaogemiaoshudezhendexiangzhendea？”
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又一天。
【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】：“jintianyoushimeizhaodaojueqiaodeyitian，genbenrongrubulea。”
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【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】：“haishibuxing。”
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【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren：“buxing！buxing！buxing！”
“老哥沉住气啊。”
“yueyukebushixiaoshier，manmanlaia。”
“nayouneimejiandande。”
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【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】：“xiongdimen，wozhaodaojueqiaole，ganxiexiongdimendezhidian。”
“日，真的假的？”
“yueyuzhirikedaia。”
zheijitian，【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】zaitiezineigengxinzhezijidejindu。
shuyoumenyeshiquanchengguanzhuzhe，haiyourenjichumouhuace，zhongyurang【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】zhaodaolejuchuanghudejueqiaole。
“woganjueyuelaiyuexiangzhendelexiongdimen，woxianzhuxiaogeduzhehao，baopinganha。”
“haha，pagechuizia。”
“aitoudianpingchelaogeyueyugaishouweileba？@aitoudianpingchedelagenanren。”
【aitoudianpingchedelagenanren】：“gaishouweile！qitian，zhixuyaoqitian，wojiuyaozhengshiyueyule！（qiayaodaxiao.jpg)”
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时间一天天过去。
yitianliangtiansantian......
erzaidaoshujitiandeshijianli，lijunshengzheiben《yueyu》depinglunqu，shuyoumendehuoyueduyuelaiyuegao。