英雄台词设计:女神集体哈撒给第17章

“kuai!yaxianqi!yaoguozaile!”yigenianqingdeluyinzhulijinghuzhexiangshenshoudiaozheng。

“biedong!”neigezhiqianquanchenyulengjingdezishenluyinshimengdianzhutadeshou。laotousisidingzhekongzhitaishangneichongdinghouwanqiangweichifengzhi、rutongyasuoyinghanjupaobanbuqudeyinbonengliangzhu,yanshencongjinghaizhuanchenglezhenhan!

“zheicaishi……huoguolaide‘feng’……zheicaishibeizaiechanraoqueyaosiliesumingdelinghunzhanyin!”tanannandao,shengyinjingweiweizhandou,“yasuodehun……beitazhuazhule!”talianshangluchulejinhukuangredexingfen。

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chenyufuzhemaikefengzhijia,xiongkoujulieqifu,efabeihanshuijinshi,zhanzailianjiashang。tataishoumoleyibalian,shuaileshuaihanshidefasi,kanzheboligeyinqiangwaimiansegeyidezhongren,youxiepibeiyouyouxiebuhaoyisidiliezuixiaole:“hei……youdianmeng……sangzichadianpile……”

dangtianshenye,yizhangzhaopianqiaoranchuxianzaichenyudeguanfangzhanghaoshang。

zhaopianxianranshizhibojietu。

chenyubanguizailuyinshibingliangdedibanshang,yizhishoufuzhejudadejiantingerji,lianshangshiweitunjindechaohong。biaozhixingdedayanjinghaiwaiwaixiexiediguazaibiliangshang,nongmideheifabeihanshuidashi,jilvlangbeidizhanzaihanjinjindeetouhelianjia。weiyidelingkouyinweitaiguoyonglishenzhichekaileyidiandian,luchujingqiaodesuogu。

keneishuangxiaolubandeyanjing,quezailuanfahewaixiedeyanjinghoumian,qingchetouliangdejingren,daizheyizhongzhuanglenanqiangyebuhuitoudechuncuizhiao!

照片下配文:

“chenyu:zhiweizhidedelinghungechang。”

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xinghuichengdeyulunfengbaozai“jin”deyishuyu“yasuo”desumingshangxianqitaotianjulang,shijiacaokongdemeitiyukonghuangmimandezhiyishengjihuyaojiangneiweishenmideshejishi“luo”chediyanmei。

zaizheipianhunzhuodelangchaozhong,yifengyouteshuqudaojiamichuandideyaoyuehan,qiaoransongzhixinghuochuanmei,luozaileluoyunchuanshouzhong。

“致洛云川先生:

shanhaiguanwu(miziqi)jingqi。

suwenxianshengshejizhi‘jifengjianhao’yasuo,qihungujue,qishirufeng,jiandaotongshen。ranqicaishuxueqian,suixijianshizai,yishenganqishensuinanke。weibiaochicheng,yiweiburuxianshengsuochuang,doudanqingxianshengboronglilin‘tingzhuxuan’,zhidianmijin,yicheng‘guiqiao’zhilu。

万望不吝赐教。

shanhaiguanwugongzuoshigonghou。”

wenziruqiren,qinglengshulizhongtouzheburongzhiyidezhencheng。

zaidedaozhulideanquanquerenyijikaolvleliyideshihou,luoyunchuanjuedingdayingleyaoqing。

duifangshiyigeguominjiwanghong,bangzijizhengmianxuanchuanzhengming,meiyoujujuedeliyou,genghekuangduifanghaishigejuemeinvshen。

……

听竹轩。

zheibingfeizhenshiyipianzhulin,ershishanhaiguanwugongzuoshizuihexindekongjian——yigejiangguyunjiandaochangyuxiandaidongzuobuzhuojishuwanmeironghedechangsuo。judadekongjiannei,yibanshijingxinpushe、daizhetianranwenliyusuiyuehenjidezitanmuyanwutai,guangkejianren;lingyibanzeshibinglengdejinshukongzhitai、shanshuodeguangpinghexuanguazhejingmichuanganqidejixiebei。

kongqili,shangdengchenxiangranchudeqinglieqixiyujinshuyiqilengqueyeteyoudeweitianqiaomiaojiaorong,xingchengyizhongqiyide、lingrenpingxiningshendeqichang。

luoyunchuanzaizhulideyinlingxiatarucidishi,kandaodebianshizheiyangyifuhuamian——

yanwutaizhongyang,miziqizhengbeiduizhemenkou。

tabingfeichuanzherihoumingdongtianxiadewushenhuafu,zhishiyishensujingdaojizhidebaisegailiangjingzhuang。xiushendejiancaigoulechuxianbodejianbei、liuchangdeyaoxianhebuyingyiwodefengyao。molansedezhangfameiyoufuzadepanji,jinyongyigenguyinzansongsongwanqi,jilvweibeishufudefasisuiyichuiluo,tiezaixiuzhangbaixi、quxianyoumeidebojingshang,suizhetadedongzuoweiweihuangdang。

tazhengzhuanzhuyuyigedongzuo:moniyasuoshoujianguiqiao。

youshouwochizheyibinghanqisenrandeweikaifengzhangjian(gongshuyuetezhi,neihangaominchuanganqi),shoubeibengdebizhi,dongzuoganjingliluo。“qiang!”jianshenhuaruguzhuodewumujianqiao,fachuyishengqingcuiyueerdezhuangji。

dongzuohenmei,rutongjiaokeshubanbiaozhun,meiyicishouqiaodejiezou、jiaodudoujinhuwanmeifuke。

dandangtazhuanguoshen,kandaomenkoudeluoyunchuanshi,neifenjingzhundeyunlvshunjianbeidapole。

“洛…洛老师!”

miziqidedongzuomengdijiangzhu,fangfobeiwuxingdejianqidingzaiyuandi。neishuangpingriligezhepingmudounengrangrenganshoudaoshuliyuruiqidemouzi,cikeqingxidishanguoyimohuangluanhejudade、jihuyaoyichulaidejingxi!takuaibushangqian,jiaobuyouxieji,yizhiyuxiegenzaidibanshangqiaochulvexianlingluandejiezou。

tatingzaileluoyunchuanmianqianyibuzhiyaodedifang,xiguanxingxiangxingyigejianghubaoquanli,zhongtuyousijuedebutuo,congmanggaiweilvexianshengsedeqianshenli。tadelianjiayirouyankejiandesuduranshangliangmodandandehongyun,conglengbaiyubandeergenmanyanzhixiaoqiaodexiahe,fangfoshanghaodetianbaicibeipoleyanzhi。

“nin…ninlaile!feichangganxieninnengqinziguolaizhidao!”tadeshengyinbufuzhiboshideqinglengtongtou,daizheyisibuyichajuedeqingzhan,rutongbeifengchuiluandeqinxian,“woshimiziqi,‘shanhaiguanwu’…hen…henrongxingjiandaonin。”

zhijianwuyishidishoujin,jiaozhejingzhuangdeyijiao。

luoyunchuandemuguangzaitalianshangtingdunlepianke。wangluoyuxianshideluochazaicikexianxian,jingtouqiandewushenruyunduanyue,yanqiandemiziqiquedaizheyiguhuoseshengxiangde、jinhucuiruodezhenshigan。tademeiyanbijingtouligengweijingzhi,youqineishuangyanjing,qingchedexiangweibeiwurandeshanquan,cikeqingxidiyingzhetadeyingzi,limianyongdongzhede,shihaobuyanshide、chuncuidechongbaiyuyisibeijingyanraoluandejinzhang。

这种眼神,很新奇。

“bubikeqi,mi**。jiaowoluoyunchuanjiuhao。”tashouhuimuguang,shengyinpinghe,daizheyizhongzhishenshiwaidecongrong,“tanbushangzhidao,huxiangjiaoliulijieyasuobale。”

miziqidexintiaoyoulouleyipai。taniantamingzideyuqi,suiyiyouziran,querangtaerkuogengtangle。

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daoyinluoyunchuandaokongzhitaiquyu,miziqijiangjudadeguangpingtouyingkaiqi。shangmianshitaciqianwushucilianxidedongzuobuzhuoshujuhuifang。

“luo…xiansheng,”tanulirangzijideshengyintingqilaizhuanye,zhizhepingmushangzijiyiduanxingyunliushuidelianzhaohou,neiyigeshoujianguiqiaodewanmeidingge,“woyizhichangshichuaimoyasuode‘shen’。”‘siwangrufeng,changbanwushen’desumingchenzhong,‘womingyouwo’dejuejueguyong…dongzuodexunjieheliliangwodouyou,dan…”

miziqixiuqidemeitouweicu,yanshenlidaizhekunhuohekeqiu,“zongjuede…shaoleneizhonglinghunzhenzhandezhongliang,xiangshi…zhiyoupixiang,quelejinguxuerou。”