“kongjuqingxuhuiyingxiangwomendeyilianxingwei，feng**nenglijiema？”
“嗯，能……”
“dangwomengandaokongjushi，changchangtongshizuochuhuibiheyilianxingwei——huibiyigerangrengandaoyouweixiededuixiang，tongshiqinjinyigerangrengandaoanquandeduixiang。jiuxiang……dangwomenjixiaomaoxizaoshi，tabujinhuicongwomenshoushangtaopao，haikenenghuipaoqulingyigetarenweianquandedifangxunqiubihu，huozhedangwomenkandaoyigehaizihaipayizhixiongededongwushi，tahuibennengdeduobizheizhidongwu，tongshihaihuituihuidaofumushenbianxunqiubaohu，suoyi……woshixianggaosufeng**，dangkongjufashengshi，yigeyilianduixiangdecunzai，nengdaijiwomenjidadeanwei。”
fengchaodiantou，yishitongyi，duifangjixudao：“yinweiniqingkuangteshu，wozanshibujianyinichiyao，danniwanshangshuibuhaozheiyidiandequebijiaojishou，suoyiwodejianyishi，ninengzhaodaoyigekexinlaideyilianduixiang，pengyouyehao，lianrenyehao，gennitongzhu，zheiyangyinggainengyouzhuyunideshuimian。”
“ng……”fengchaochiyidediandiantou，taxiangqilexulingqing，tayecengyaoqiuguoyaoyutayiqizhu，tameitongyi，ruguotatongyile，tashibushijiubuhuigentafenshoule。
“haolefeng**，jintianwomenjiudaozheili。ng……nini，xuexiaojiuxianbiequle，denghuifudechabuduozaifugong，lingwai，ruguofeng**youshijian，woxiwangninengmeizhouhuozhemeiliangzhoulaiyici，zanmenyibuyibu，banidewentijiejue，haoma？”
“hao……”fengchaowen：“ruguoxiazhouyaolai，yeshizheigeshijianma？”
“keyi，”yishengcongshafashangqishen，“pingshiniganjueyourenhebushi，yekeyisuishilaizhaowo，buyongyuyue。”
“haode，xiexiemengyisheng。”
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congzhenshichulai，fengchaojiantongningzhengwaizaidatingshatຊfashangkanshouji。
“童童……”
“a，chulaila？”tongningkanleyanshouji，“jingranliaolelianggeduoxiaoshi！”
“是吗？”
“shia，14dian30jinqude，nikan……”tongningjiangshoujijudaofengchaoyanqian，“kuai17dianleei。”
liangrenbianshuobianwangwaizou，daolemenwai，tongningdishengwenfengchao：“ganjuezenmeyang？”
“haibucuo，yikaishijuedezheiliguaiguaide，danliaoxialaiganjueyishenghaishitingzhuanyede，xianzaijiuganjue……ganjuexiangzuoleyichangxinli**，zhenggerenhaitingshufutingpingjingde。”
“neijiuhaoneijiuhao，”tongningminzuixiaoxiao，“tingwotongshishuo，zhiqiantayougeqinqidenver，jiu……douyiyudebuxingle，zishalehaojihui，meisicheng，houlaibuzhicongnaertingshuolezheigezhensuo，jiuxiangzhesimadanghuomayi，guolaiqiaoqiao，yikaishi，neiguinvshuoshenmeyebuyuanyilai，houlai，jushuocailaileyici，zhihoujiutebiepeihele，zaiwanghou，luluxuxulaileyouqibaci，neiguinvjiuhaole。”
“chedihaole？”fengchaoyouxiejingya，suiranganggangdeliaotiandequeyouyong，danhaoxiangyemeidaoneimeshenqidedibuya，mofei……mengyishengdedazhaohaizaihoutou？
“haole，xianzaigaosanni，genzhengchangrenyiyang，meitianxuexikedaijingerle，zongzhi，zishadeshi，tingwotongshishuo，yiciyemeizaitile，tongshishuotaqinqidougaoxinghuaile，haijizhensuosonglemianjinqini！”
“wo……”fengchaoxiangqifangcaizaizhensuodatingdequekandaolejimianjinqi，“kanlaiwoyeyaojianchiguolaikanzhenle。”
“fangxinba，youwojianduni，nitoubulelan！”
“谢谢你，童童。”
“ai，nizheishuoxiexiedemaobing，wozhenshi……”tongningzhoumeiwangzhefengchaodunledun，youxiaodao：“jiranxiexiewo，buruwanshangqingwochihuoguoba，ganggangkanleyijiaxinkaidedian，jiuzaifujin，liudazhejiunengdao。”
“好，请你吃！”
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shuoshiliudazhejiunengdao，liangrenquelengshengshengzoule20duofenzhongcaidaodifang，haozaichunguangdahao，linjieyishuyishudehaitangkaidexuanlan，zongranshizouzhe，fengchaoyebujuedelei，tongningjiubuyiyangle，zoujibujiuhanjiaotong，lianlianfangmahoupao：“zaozhidaogangganghaishidachele……”
huoguodianzaiyitiaorenaodemeishijieshang，fengchaoyikan，chuleshineikongjian，zheijiadianhaiyougedadadelutai，lutaishangzhonglehaoxieyinghua，yifangfangcanzhuobianbaizaiyishushuyinghuaxia，yibianchihuoguohainengyibianshanghua，guaibudeshengyihao。
“fandiandoushiyaopaiduide，womenlaidezao，suanshijianlegedabianyi，zouba……”
tongningmoquancazhang，sanbuzuoliangbupadaolutai，tiaolegelinjiedeweizhi，zheiyangjinengshanghua，younengshangjiejing。
henkuai，guodi、shuancaifenfenshangzhuo，dagaishiyouxiela，liangrenchidemanmianhongguang，tongningyaoletingpijiu，fengchaoyaolepingdounai，liangrenbianchibianhebianliao。
“zuotianwanshangnizhendehesiwole。”
“duibuqia，jintianyishenggenwoliaoleliaoyilianduixiang，zhenbuzhidao，meiyouniwogaizenmeban……”
“jiranruci，yaobuzaliangjiehundele？dahuoguorizi，fanzhengwoyezhaobudaoduixiang，wobamayouchengtianxianqiwo。”
fengchaoxiao：“meizhengjing……nishizhaobudaoduixiangma？”
“yubudaoheshide，kebujiushizhaobudao。”
“ng……yaobuwomenquxiangqinba？”
tingfengchaoshuoyaoquxiangqin，tongningyikoupijiuchadianpenchulai，“woquxiangqinhaihaoshuo，nizheipingrilijigunzidabuchugemenpideshekong，quxiangshenmeqin？”
“aiya，woshuodeshizhende，jintianyishenggenwoshuo，zhaogewendingde、kexinrendeyilianduixiang，yikuaierzhu，yexuduiwodeqingkuangyoubangzhu，wojiuxiangshuo，zhaogenanpengyou……”
“ng……”tongningjiazhemaoduzaiguolishangshangxiaxia，“zheimeshuoyeyoudaoli，wosuirannengpeinizhuyizhenzi，danmeibanfazhangqigenniyikuaierzhu，nigennibazhuyiqiyoubudejinger……zhaogebucuodenanren，daoshigeyilaoyongyidehaobanfa。”
“duia，wobenlaixiangshuoninengbunenggenwoyikuaierzhude，youxiangdaonibamakendingbuhuifangnichulai。”
“huitouwogentamenjiandanshuoxianideqingkuang，zheizhenziwojiuzhuzainizheibian，dengnizhaodaonanpengyou，wozaibanhuiqu。”
“好……”
liangrenshuozhe，juqishouzhongbeizipengleyixia。
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yesejianjiananxialai，zhouweizhuozijianjianbeizuoman，linzhuozhijian，biciliaotiandeshengyinbushichuanruerji，buzhishicuojuehaishizenmehuishi，fengchaozongganjueyourenzaikanziji，taguqiyongqitaitouqueren，jianlinzhuoqueshiyoujigezhongniannanrenzaidingzhezijikan，duifangyanshenshifenxiaozhang，beifengchaofaxianyebushanduo，fengchaoyouxiehaipa，biancaocaoshouhuileshixian，benxianggaosutongning，youdanxinbeiduifangtingjian，zhihaonachushoujijitongningfaxiaoxi。
shoudaoxiaoxi，tongningyezhuantou，qiahaozhuangshangduifangjirendeshixian，tongningbijingdanda，youhelexiejiu，jiudingzheneijirenkan，shuangfangduishilejimiao，jigenanrenbianjiangtoubieleguoqu，kaishichidongxiliaotian。
qixian，fengchaohetongningchenjinzaizheixiaoxiaodeshenglizhong，hunbuzaiyiduifangzailiaoxieshenme，kechizhechizhe，linzhuoliaotiandeshengyinyuelaiyueda，dadaofengchaohetongningxiangbutingdoubuxingdechengdu，bingqie，tamenliaodeneirong，sihuhefengchaoyouguan……
“zheibushisangzhongneigemeinvbanzhurenma？”
“ganggangkanle，dequeyoujifenzise，jiwowanwanwoyeyuanyi！”
“qianzhenzitabushibisilezijidexueshengma？zenmexianzaihaiyoulianchulaichihuoguo？”
“ai，zheiniantoudelaoshia，shifengshideyigaibuxing，genzaonianmeifaerbile。”
“nimenbieshuole，zaishuorengaiyiyule，meikanxinwenma，qianxierizi，zheiweilaoshiwanshizongle，jiaojingchayizhenhaozhao！”
“e，shizong，quzishala？jieguoyoumeisi？zheitamacaijiaolangfeigonggongziyuana！”
……
fengchaotingzhe，lianseyuelaiyuebai，tongningxiangshangqianlilun，beitalazhuhaojici，chenzhenaozhonghaicancunyoujifenlizhi，fengchaoganmangshoushidongxi，xiangdaizhetongningganjinlikai。
linzhuojimingnanzijianzhuang，bujinbuxiaoting，fanerqizuibashe，buyiburao。
“yo，kankan，rentingbuxiaqule，yaozoule……”
“haishigedanxiaodezhuni，bisixueshengdeqishinaqule？”
……
fengchaozhengditousaomajiezhang，yibuliushen，tongningyijinggenduifangchaoleqilai。
“wei，**degoudongxi，nimenshuoshenmeni？”
“ya，zenmehaimarenni？”
duifangjiantongningqishixiongxiong，shengpazhouweirenqiaochutamenlikui，likebaichuyifushouqifudemoyanglai，bujinruci，jirensihuhaiwuhuiletongningdeshenfen，yiweigenlaoshiyiqichifandeyebidingshilaoshi，yushiqizhongyirenyougaoshengrangrangzhebuleyiju：“haishigelaoshini，shuohuazheimezang！”
“wotamashuohuajiushizangzenmele？genrenshuorenhua，genchushenghainengshuorenhuale？”
“tongtong，womenzouba，zouba……”
fengchaobutinglachetongningxiaoshengquanjia，xiangyizouxishiningren，meixiangdaotongningshikongyiban，yuemayuelaijing，“laoshizenmele？a？nimentamadaoshishuoa，laoshizenmele？！laoshijiugaiguaiguaizhanzherennimenzaoyaoruma？laoshishouqifulejiubixuderenqitunsheng？laoshibushiren？laoshijiugaisi？xueshengyichushijiuwanglaoshitoushanglai？laoshishinidieshinimahaishinizuzonga？yiqunbushihaodaidebiwanyier，laoshibunengmaren，wotamabushilaoshiniguanwo？wokannimenyigegedouzhanglezhanggouzui，zenmehaizaizheichihuoguobuquchishia？！！”
tingtongningmadenanting，duifangqizhongyirencongrenqunzhongchonglechulai，shoulihailinlegepijiuping，“wotamajinilianle？chou**！”shuozheyangqishoulidejiupingjiuyaoxiangtongningzalai。
yankanneipijiupingxiayimiaojiuyaozaxiangtongningdenaodai，fengchaolaibujiduoxiang，yibukuadaotongningshenqian，jiangtahuzaihuaizhong，tongshibijinshuangyan，bengjinshenzi，dengdaizhepijiupingzaxiangzijidehounaoshao……
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